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InGeniousPoet
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"This Board is dying...."


  

          

I came here
because the wolves in the willows howl
from their cubicles and church pews.
I can hear them clicking their teeth,
tapping their pens,
smiling with their fangs out
in staff meetings and check out lines

I needed to escape,
a safe haven to fill my soul with inspiration
because arguing with the wife
the kids
myself
is like quicksand and these wolves are getting closer
smelling my blood in the air.

So I come here after years
Years where I grew weak
and find it empty.
Statues of poets with vines rhymed and wrapped around them
stragglers singing songs that go unheard.
Once a vibrant village
seems to only be a shadow of its spendor

I came here for inspiration
because inspiration is armor and fortitude
and thats what I need right now to
steel myself against these wolves
these vultures
and their tapping pens...

Alas I may have come a year too late
and now I have no where to go.....
________________________________________
"With peace and love in my lungs,
I hold my breath until the Poet returns."

--Boxcarboys

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
Not dying, but clearly writers
Mar 24th 2015
1
RE: Not dying, but clearly writers
Mar 31st 2015
5
It's too easy to claim death.
Mar 24th 2015
2
RE: This Board is dying....
Mar 27th 2015
3
RE: This Board is dying....
Mar 31st 2015
6
      RE: you right i remain silent
Apr 02nd 2015
7
RE: This Board is dying....
Mar 28th 2015
4
across a wasteland
Apr 14th 2015
8
RE: across a wasteland
Apr 14th 2015
9
RE: across a wasteland
Apr 21st 2015
10
ovation of the standing nature!
Apr 27th 2015
12
grand finaleez
Apr 25th 2015
11
RE: This Board is dying....
Apr 29th 2015
13
please share that!
Apr 29th 2015
14
*Nods*
May 15th 2015
15
RE: This Board is dying....
Jun 27th 2015
19
*head nod*
Jun 17th 2015
16
what up Know!
Jun 18th 2015
17
      Yo whats good!
Jun 18th 2015
18

ThaAnthology
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1. "Not dying, but clearly writers "
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don't post like they used to anymore. Not just here but other sites as well. My wonder is if there are still writers and poets out there willing and down to share. It's been a great while since 1999-2001 when writing and creativity were at an apex.

Times have changed and writers have changed. Admittedly I stopped writing poetry a more than a few years ago. Marriage, children, unemployment, re-employment etc.

But I am still here. Just wrote a novel also.

I feel like if folk can give maybe 20 mins a day. Post a piece or two, respond to a piece or two...

it can grow again.

www.anthologyfmn.com

Enter the Written World of Fahim Malik Nassar

The House of Caine (available)

Melancholoy Funk (available)

Tha Anthology (Words 2001-2003) Poetry inspired by OKP and Wash, DC
(available)

The Spook who sat by the Radio Poetry (av

  

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InGeniousPoet
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Tue Mar-31-15 09:13 AM

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5. "RE: Not dying, but clearly writers "
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Yeah I feel you, been throught the same thing personally. I'm a poet, always have been but the more I get swept into "real life" the further away I get from my inner poet.

I came back here bc I really needed the inspiration and just felt flat. No knocking the people that do post, but it aint like it was back in the day.

Man there used to be epic freestyle battles, Poems that would extend from writer to writer... Mad love for the ones that had your respect.

It was like we all grew up together and then grew apart. I'm guilty of it too. Not sure what I expected when I came back, but not the way it is now...


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"With peace and love in my lungs,
I hold my breath until the Poet returns."

  

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ThaAnthology
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2. "It's too easy to claim death. "
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We are creatives, right?

www.anthologyfmn.com

Enter the Written World of Fahim Malik Nassar

The House of Caine (available)

Melancholoy Funk (available)

Tha Anthology (Words 2001-2003) Poetry inspired by OKP and Wash, DC
(available)

The Spook who sat by the Radio Poetry (av

  

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tycho
Member since May 09th 2011
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Fri Mar-27-15 10:43 AM

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3. "RE: This Board is dying...."
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never too late pop and shake
the share the take yogi and bo bo
a picnic at the lake
love family no mistakes
have been made did you pay your dues
my shoes are blue
Elvis had not clue
spotted alive we thrive we hide
but the garden blooms wide
vineyards divine in speech
to teach to preach to all those lost in hope
get down from the rope
grouping a willow tree soap
doesn't get rid of sin my papers is toilet thin
clans and kinfolks
forks and spokes on big wills
I'm feeling the vent so I constructed stints
to keep eyes open can you see all things focus on you
tube icu
northern lights that burn down artic castles we
call supreme a dream of freedom in bondage of laws
entrapped in devils devices justice is flawed
but is something dying because it don't speak
most are like rats that sneak
to prevent the shark attacks
maybe you too should act like that?

king david once pretended to be crazy to live a health long life instead of wedding the knife that cut life lines be encourage and live life aboundantly

peace

  

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InGeniousPoet
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6. "RE: This Board is dying...."
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*sigh*

This, is what I mean.
My apologies if you are fourteen
finger swypes to the bone on your LCD screen
palm gripped on your IPhone
scrolling past the memes
Skull & Crossbones as your gallery theme...


I see what you mean, or at least what your getting at
but without proper spacing, pacing
your writing falls flat.
I'm spending more time circling back
trying to understand what you said
that I probably missed the point, or it flew over my head

But even when I do, sit and dissect
Your context.
Dialect.
Intellect.
I'm hoping that its like ancient Aztec but instead its
Yogi and BooBoo.
Don't get me wrong, I got love for Jellystone
but its like you didnt even read my post.

I'm trying to return to a board where I can toast with scholars again.
I used to sit for hours on end
right here...
Pad to pen.
I came back to get that magic again and I get rats and shark attacks...

*sigh*
________________________________________
"With peace and love in my lungs,
I hold my breath until the Poet returns."

  

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tycho
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7. "RE: you right i remain silent"
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wrong way educated people don't pay
for horse meat only kids where's the beef play
Wendy's merry go round shout up and hit the jay
all I caught was ZZZZs please answers
taken of context I'm Clark and you Lex
I rebuke same sex politics but you lick
up vomit like I was speaking Amish blue balls
I give motion to all fish fisher men's pride
you in for a Scooby snack ride
and your reply is all shaggy
pull up your pants sagging ass cheeks out (you know that should be against the law)

love Zen
can you hear the tongue of the dog lick himself with no body?

one love my bad I thought you was Bitching

  

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HueyNewton
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Sat Mar-28-15 02:43 PM

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4. "RE: This Board is dying...."
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well wrote & described,, I agree, the board ain't what it used to be
I rarely stop by now, perhaps I wiLL more . .

across 110th street
-xxx

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

  

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PG
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8. "across a wasteland"
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the wind still blows fertile seeds towards distant waters
somewhere the land may be arable yet,
soaked rich with the ink of a million blotters
waiting to stamp signposts with parables we forget
leading the way through the timeless maze of our conditions and thoughts,
to age old feelings expressed repressed or redressed in sylables of potent language
are they written here or does our home starve for submissions while it slowly rots
Methinks not.. for under the surface leviathans dwell and their poetic soul peices yet unwritten, unspoken, languish
perhaps to surface
perhaps to remain submerged
but this freestyle is an ocean of purpose
simply waiting for the tide to turn... so be encouraged.

  

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wetsalt
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9. "RE: across a wasteland"
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Agreed PG. Well said

  

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InGeniousPoet
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10. "RE: across a wasteland"
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Well done. Thank you, I needed that forreal

  

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ThaAnthology
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12. "ovation of the standing nature!"
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www.anthologyfmn.com

Enter the Written World of Fahim Malik Nassar

The House of Caine (available)

Melancholoy Funk (available)

Tha Anthology (Words 2001-2003) Poetry inspired by OKP and Wash, DC
(available)

The Spook who sat by the Radio Poetry (av

  

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Babynoon
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11. "grand finaleez"
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that energy that kills....all freedom.

good post

bravo*

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Intrepid Vixen
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13. "RE: This Board is dying...."
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Indeed we have all been remiss in posting and moving the pen, really using our God given talents as we all run in the rat race. However, we are still here. We still remain. These voices that link words to emotions down to the inner workings of such beginnings. Poetry is like a phoenix. It may die but it'll come back again. My city is burning and there's a poem within me so epic I may be afraid to write it...but wait...here it comes...
~~~~~~~~
When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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14. "please share that! "
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www.anthologyfmn.com

Enter the Written World of Fahim Malik Nassar

The House of Caine (available)

Melancholoy Funk (available)

Tha Anthology (Words 2001-2003) Poetry inspired by OKP and Wash, DC
(available)

The Spook who sat by the Radio Poetry (av

  

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Shakeet Lokh Em
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15. "*Nods*"
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"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought

  

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19. "RE: This Board is dying...."
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feeling that Intrepid in many ways yes my city was burning now racism is being lynched or at least the conversation is on the fence...so yes words are burning in me
relationships in the pan while others linger in the gallows waiting trial
yes these words are flowing but my finger sticks

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




www.myspace.com/asiem61

  

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16. "*head nod*"
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nm

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17. "what up Know! "
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www.anthologyfmn.com

Enter the Written World of Fahim Malik Nassar

The House of Caine (available)

Melancholoy Funk (available)

Tha Anthology (Words 2001-2003) Poetry inspired by OKP and Wash, DC
(available)

The Spook who sat by the Radio Poetry (av

  

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18. "Yo whats good!"
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nm

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