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Morehouse
Member since Feb 25th 2003
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Wed Feb-25-15 01:16 PM

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"yearning"


  

          


so fixated am i on the swell
of pheromone and indica
haze you've got me under

my toes dug deep
in the quicksand of
anticipation,

i find it hard to remember
your name,
until i call it

uncontrollably
dripping from my lips
onto your

heart skipped
a beat

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
well damn!
Mar 20th 2015
1
RE: yearning
Mar 28th 2015
2
you almost never disappoint
Jun 01st 2015
3

ThaAnthology
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Fri Mar-20-15 12:28 PM

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1. "well damn! "
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excellent visuals... I really dug the pacing too!

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Tha Anthology (Words 2001-2003) Poetry inspired by OKP and Wash, DC
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HueyNewton
Member since Feb 27th 2005
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Sat Mar-28-15 03:01 PM

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2. "RE: yearning"
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good 2 see ur stiLL doin' ya thing Morehouse! Nice one!

across 110th street
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they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

  

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iammindful
Member since Apr 29th 2012
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Mon Jun-01-15 07:12 PM

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3. "you almost never disappoint"
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Mon Jun-01-15 07:13 PM by iammindful

  

          

seriously...

"my toes dug deep
in the quicksand of
anticipation,

i find it hard to remember
your name,
until i call it

uncontrollably
dripping from my lips"

It's good to log in and see you're still writing with a passion that inspires others. I dug this.

http://meetmsmindful.wordpress.com
http://www.lulu.com/content/132318

  

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