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Babynoon
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Wed Feb-11-15 12:03 PM

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"BEGENTLE"


          

They were:
Brutal
Cold
Heartless
Eager
Rude
Foul
Smelly
Fake
Phony
Unpleasant
Un-Loved, un-loved
And again Un-loved

But we should be gentle?.

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Subject Author Message Date ID
Criticism
Feb 12th 2015
1
RE: Criticism
Feb 16th 2015
2

cousin
Member since Jan 29th 2006
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Thu Feb-12-15 01:53 AM

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1. "Criticism"
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>They were:
>Brutal
>Cold
>Heartless
>Eager
>Rude
>Foul
>Smelly
>Fake
>Phony
>Unpleasant
>Un-Loved, un-loved
>And again Un-loved
>
>But we should be gentle?.
>
>

This flowed smoothly off of the tounge. Actually, I can see this being a hook to a song.
Excellent piece.

  

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Babynoon
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Mon Feb-16-15 12:10 PM

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2. "RE: Criticism"
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Every word is appreciated, constructive, luv or support. Thanks

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