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lola1980
Member since Aug 26th 2012
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Tue Feb-03-15 05:36 PM

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""The Purest Heart""


          

My bed is cold
You are not here
I left you alone
For yet another year
Our love grew dreadful
Faces filled with scorn
Our fervent desires
Now forever gone
The storms we fueled
Roared through the night
They only quieted
When our spirits wept
True love is not magical
And happily ever is not forever
Our days are just a measure
Of the purest hearts we treasure
And you my dear are the purest heart I know
For this reason alone
Our love will never go
…away for long

Desta

“Writing is a potion of devotion, magical, mysterious and mighty” Desta

"Love is like the sea. It's a moving thing, but still and all, it takes its shape from the shore it meets, and it's different with every shore. ”
Zora Neale Hurston

  

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Very Thought Provoking
Feb 03rd 2015
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RE: Very Thought Provoking
Feb 23rd 2015
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cousin
Member since Jan 29th 2006
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Tue Feb-03-15 10:54 PM

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1. "Very Thought Provoking"
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Tue Feb-03-15 10:55 PM by cousin

  

          

>My bed is cold
>You are not here
>I left you alone
>For yet another year
>Our love grew dreadful
>Faces filled with scorn
>Our fervent desires
>Now forever gone
>The storms we fueled
>Roared through the night
>They only quieted
>When our spirits wept
>True love is not magical
>And happily ever is not forever
>Our days are just a measure
>Of the purest hearts we treasure
>And you my dear are the purest heart I know
>For this reason alone
>Our love will never go
>…away for long
>
>Desta
>


Wow, this actually held me captive, and I didn't resist. Nicely written.

  

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lola1980
Member since Aug 26th 2012
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Mon Feb-23-15 04:39 PM

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2. "RE: Very Thought Provoking"
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Thank you very much for your feedback.

“Writing is a potion of devotion, magical, mysterious and mighty” Desta

"Love is like the sea. It's a moving thing, but still and all, it takes its shape from the shore it meets, and it's different with every shore. ”
Zora Neale Hurston

  

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