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cousin
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Thu Jan-22-15 04:36 PM

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"J Dilla-Trashy instrumental or Look of love pt1"
Thu Jan-22-15 05:02 PM by cousin

  

          

I used both beats for this verse.

Its been years since I've posted.
but here we go, yo,



Yo!
Brought in, the new year, with a glass of champaigne//
'We made it' was the add I campaigned//
I lost a couple loved ones// had to mask pain//
To summerize the year yall, I had a bad game//
You've gotta have, aim//
To reach a vision, in the midst of crisis//
International//Warfare//Picture Isis//
Walking toward you with//
Devices//
Telling you//
Recite this//
Or merit you//
As Lifeless//
A better view//
Is to stay in front of, the dude ahead of you//
And never let him cycle, like the letter 'U'//
Rewrite, the instruction manual, for better use//
This, type of thinking, can put you on a pedestal//
And with Cuba no longer barred//
I can, sit back, piff a cigar//
Planetarium, with Neil Tyson//
Let him take me and my daughter, on a trip to the stars//
First stop, we'll be visiting mars, and dimensions beyond//
Putting in, perspective, what division we are//
Debating on, if planets abroad, have simian arms//
Are we merely alone?//
or are we really involved?//
And if we knew the answer, what is really the cost?//
And as far as intelligence, you think you're the boss//
Just imagine, if in comparison, you shrink to a moth//
Pause//
It can bring you, remorse//
That if our molecular corse, was of surrogate force//
I'm just bringing forth, questions of the past, today//
Are we one, DNA, or a vast array//
Or, an intentional castaway//
With a task, to charade, or advance display//
Went from primitive, to man, today//
From inquisitive, to cruising on the, Mandalay//
And to limit the elate, I'll emasculate//
Are you living, in a trance, awake?
Or are you trying, to advance, a race//
This is cerebral calisthenics//
The wordplay//
Killing the verbals, you got a medic?//
A thursday//
I'm hitting the hurdles, I gotta get it//
I've gotta be, indebted//
I've gotta re-cement it, if I wanna re-invent it//
Don't wanna be a menace//
I've caused, enough harm, to date//
Wishing I could just, casket, my moms, awake//
"I'm straight, your granddaughter, is 8,
with straight A's, on every, report card, to date,
I'm sorry for all the late, phone calls, awake,
Knowing I was in a gate, or a car, with Jake,
Was a phase, I wish I could just, wash, away,
I'm amazed, that I didn't just, walk, away"//
And it pains//
Knowing that I didn't, rearrange//
The history, is tipping me, insane//
Serenity, and aim//
Is what I would, eventually, attain//
And trinity, has given me a lane//
On a, pathway, so consider me, arraigned//
With, dreams bigger, then a vicinity, in Maine//
Eventually, validity, will render me, a claim//
Until then, I'm using anonymity, to gain//
Can it, be in vein//
The current, status of the game//
Has got me automatically ashamed//
What happened to the, insight, matter in the brain?//
While you scatter in the rain, I'll be laddering the plane//
Autistic, envisionist//
Who could flavor, the vanity in things//
I exhibit//
Dna, in anatomy of kings..

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
RE: J Dilla-Trashy instrumental or Look of love pt1
Feb 02nd 2015
1
Respect
Feb 02nd 2015
2
      RE: "As I now see, the boards are dead today"
Feb 03rd 2015
3
           RE: "As I now see, the boards are dead today"
Feb 03rd 2015
4
                I still stop thru .....
Feb 12th 2015
5
                     RE: I still stop thru .....
Feb 12th 2015
6

ak_reborn
Member since Sep 24th 2005
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Mon Feb-02-15 01:49 PM

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1. "RE: J Dilla-Trashy instrumental or Look of love pt1"
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My memory aint great yo, but I think this is the best verse/song whatever the f ive read from you period, infact its some of the best lyrics ive read from a rapper on the boards in years, should definitely be recorded.

I didnt even read it before playing the instrumental, I turned on the instrumental and it flowed perfectly to me, shit was deep yo, Im mad inspired.

Intoxication, my voicebox rocks the nation
Sweet affiliation, the Doe Or Die situation - Az

  

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cousin
Member since Jan 29th 2006
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Mon Feb-02-15 06:18 PM

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2. "Respect"
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Thats deep bruh. I appreciate the genuine feedback. As I now see, the boards are dead today. I remember when cats like Zin, Empro, Lunchbox, Photo, EZ,and yourself just to name a few, would have the boards on fire.

Its crazy because everyone's gotten older. I'd like to see if they still got it or not.

You probably remember when the Freestyle Board crashed a couple years ago, and all posts before that crash, got deleted. Before that crash, I wrote a verse called "Lord Forgive Me". It was almost as long as this Jdilla titled verse and I got crazy responses from it.

Lol...
I gotta laugh, because now, I don't even believe in God.
I can't remember that whole verse today to save my life. But that used to be my favorite verse, until this.

Again, goodlook.

  

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ak_reborn
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Tue Feb-03-15 04:22 AM

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3. "RE: "As I now see, the boards are dead today""
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I cant remember how long the board activity has been struggling for, even before I remember posts were slowing down but compared to this that was lively. I don't think there's been enough effort to restore it. I am pretty much surprised the freestyle board hasn't been deleted yet.

Intoxication, my voicebox rocks the nation
Sweet affiliation, the Doe Or Die situation - Az

  

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cousin
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Tue Feb-03-15 11:00 PM

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4. "RE: "As I now see, the boards are dead today""
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Yea, I'm surprised too.

  

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Zin
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Thu Feb-12-15 09:11 AM

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5. "I still stop thru ....."
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def a dope azz verse here .. i was shocked to see me on the front page lil waaaaa?? lol

sig.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Guess who's Back

  

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cousin
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Thu Feb-12-15 10:12 AM

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6. "RE: I still stop thru ....."
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Thats whats up. I just wanted to show representation that there were once emcees on here. I was gonna bump posts from many more people, but I didn't wanna creat a ghost board, having new folks come in and see all these posts from '06-'07 lol

Good to see you back up though bruh.

  

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