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OKScholar
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Sat Dec-20-14 03:09 PM

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"weeping willows"


          

The winds that whip my worry around
Found me naked under the willow by the sound
It yelled that i could not escape my fate
Must confront or succumb to hate
Not of anyone else, or anything
But of myself and the worries I bring
The willow once a happy tree,
but now it weeped because of me.

My life is lived through words and how I mold them into poetry- Jorge Luis Borges

  

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wow
Dec 26th 2014
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RE: wow
Dec 27th 2014
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RE: weeping willows
Dec 27th 2014
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RE: weeping willows
Dec 27th 2014
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they weep for reasons
Jun 07th 2015
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ThaAnthology
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Fri Dec-26-14 01:51 PM

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1. "wow"
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this is quiet, powerful and resonant. Thank you.

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OKScholar
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Sat Dec-27-14 11:32 PM

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3. "RE: wow"
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thank you

My life is lived through words and how I mold them into poetry- Jorge Luis Borges

  

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Intrepid Vixen
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2. "RE: weeping willows"
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I have often pondered upon weeping willow trees. They used to scare me as a child, gently swaying in the wind. They knew something, they saw all I often thought. And I was frightened of what that was...what the sorrowful tree knew that I didn't. Your piece was lovely.
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When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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OKScholar
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thank you

My life is lived through words and how I mold them into poetry- Jorge Luis Borges

  

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iammindful
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5. "they weep for reasons"
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which you greatly displayed here:

Not of anyone else, or anything
But of myself and the worries I bring
The willow once a happy tree,
but now it weeped because of me

short, succinct, rhythmic, and appreciated.

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