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zoso
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Fri Dec-05-14 10:36 PM

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"Jam!"


          

ORK CITY. NOW ENTERING NEW YORK CITY. NOW ENTERING NEW YORK..
BE ALERT! 
SUDDEN STOPS! 
LEFT LANE CLOSED!
MERGE RIGHT>>>>>

                                                              
                                  Clusters of civilization
                                                              
                    flock the parted yellow stripped roads
                                                              
                                  And still Ew the pigeons
                                                              
                                         As one from south
                                                              
                                I close my eyes and listen
                                                              
                               To the phatic conversations
                                                              
                                            Agitated horns
                                                              
                                          and busted pipes
                                                              
                          Never saying all they've reached
                                                              
                                    As much as the heights 
                                                              
                                  Immune to their own hype
                                                              
                       But i still marvel at the buildings
                                                              
                                        though hard to see
                                                              
                               As the man made clouds rise
                                                              
                           Such milestones in small spaces
                                                              
                                           The mind pushed
                                                              
                           Forced to think [inside the box]

  

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RE: high
Dec 06th 2014
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wonderfully visual
Dec 10th 2014
2

tycho
Member since May 09th 2011
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Sat Dec-06-14 11:11 AM

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car jam unholy lamb brakes slam
watch out for the hustler's scam
corn bread, hocks and hams 
searching for fame 
is the knife, fork and spoon lame
I'll be the same
if I could see pass the chronic smoke
tail pipes commit jokes
crime a dime unmoved twisting spokes
tone loc Wild 
Thing" and "Funky Cold Medina
yo flo couldn't be any clearer
mr. Clean cleaner
pop collards in pot
keep it up and you'll be on top
until you start popping
or get pop dropping these jewels
kool shitz mad blitz
big small 2 Pac slit wrist
and I wish you the best in the nightmare of christmas
pass the mic back
flex inside outside motor mouth diary
I'm allergic to dairy
ain't that scary merry merry hoho ho
go?

respectfully
yours

tete
the end to everything
peace



  

  

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ThaAnthology
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Wed Dec-10-14 12:33 PM

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I loved the rhythm of this as well. 

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