skip the introduction, D i'm the novice killer bee always got royal flush, cause the cards are with me it's what i see, with the third eye within my mind that makes me catch your tough bluff to fully undermine strategies of enemies with my melodies a felony increasing the intensity of my consistant weaponry telepathy set my phaser rays to stun and daze i blaze for days burning through shades create artificial exceptions to the rule got my own laws, my own flaws, i be my own boss no school,i wont be a tool it's the golden rule 'carpe diem' in your face mind's traveling in space in rhyme form like a wave and a particle no one's certain where i am never leave a trace it is heisenberg's uncertainty principle quantum physical invisible pinnacle dropping digital visual syllables from lyrical miracles leaving you quizzical idiotical imbeciles lacking logical intelligence blocking the rational process their brains fail to adress makin me nauseous ape planet throwing feces to other species Oxygen decreases fourty plus degrees and water's rising, it wont suprise me if this the end of the line
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it is heisenberg's uncertainty principle quantum physical invisible pinnacle dropping digital visual syllables from lyrical miracles leaving you quizzical idiotical imbeciles lacking logical intelligence blocking the rational process their brains fail to adress makin me nauseous ape planet throwing feces to other species Oxygen decreases fourty plus degrees and water's rising, it wont suprise me if this the end of the line
I like what you did above. Flows well, definitely gave me a *head nod* vibe while reading. It's one of those things tho that made me say to myself, "I'm wondering if the flow of this will be just as good aloud?" A few misspelled words here and there, but definitely worth others reading and perhaps responding with a battle verse or two. Peace~