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zoso
Member since Jun 29th 2014
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Wed Aug-27-14 09:13 PM

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"Out of tune Blues"


          

Like ivy growing
Spirals coil to grab the hands of god
All I hear is static

The message cant be deciphered
Because you chose to relax it
Our health is on helicoids
Nommos know it
Flat planes pick up white noise
Channeling signals with our strands
Daily maintenance
Check our wave
Check our length
Our antennas bent
Kinks and ripples
Pulling us
Beyond the visual
World

  

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hmmm.. that's kinda wild.
Sep 04th 2014
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RE: Out of tune Blues
Sep 04th 2014
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PG
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Thu Sep-04-14 03:24 AM

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1. "hmmm.. that's kinda wild."
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lola1980
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Thu Sep-04-14 12:28 PM

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2. "RE: Out of tune Blues"
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This writing reminds me how distracted I get with information overload via social media. This leaves me seeking the serenity of simpler times, less noise in the channel by way of daydreaming, reading a book that I can't put down, thinking out of the box instead of living in some one else's reality. Good thoughts in this writing I can reflect on. Thank you for sharing.

Desta

“Writing is a potion of devotion, magical, mysterious and mighty” Desta

"Love is like the sea. It's a moving thing, but still and all, it takes its shape from the shore it meets, and it's different with every shore. ”
Zora Neale Hurston

  

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