Printer-friendly copy Email this topic to a friend
Lobby Freestyle Board topic #93232

Subject: "MARINATE IN THE MOMENT" Previous topic | Next topic
DEB686
Member since Sep 03rd 2013
4 posts
Sun Jul-06-14 08:12 PM

Click to send email to this author Click to send private message to this authorClick to view this author's profileClick to add this author to your buddy list
"MARINATE IN THE MOMENT"


  

          

Marinate in the moment
Release the tick tock in your dome
Holding you hostage to a smart phone
Alarm yourself with now
The dawning of the day and deliverance of night
A beautiful and blessed timescape to embrace

Marinate in the moment
Connect with self family and community
Prepare your heart and mind with expressions of gratitude
Purpose your will with the Most High

Time in a tomb of 365 days 24 hours 1st and the 15 of the month pay days
Diminshes demolishes downgrades our existence
Moments marinated with love have no numbers attached
Be still and relish the limitless moments



DEB
The Three Amigas: Abuela, Madre, Hija

  

Printer-friendly copy | Reply | Reply with quote | Top


Topic Outline
Subject Author Message Date ID
RE: MARINATE IN THE MOMENT
Jul 17th 2014
1
RE: MARINATE IN THE MOMENT
Jul 17th 2014
2
RE: MARINATE IN THE MOMENT
Dec 19th 2014
3

Otto
Member since Dec 19th 2002
4624 posts
Thu Jul-17-14 12:58 PM

Click to send private message to this authorClick to view this author's profileClick to add this author to your buddy list
1. "RE: MARINATE IN THE MOMENT"
In response to Reply # 0


  

          

Mmmm....

I found these lines to be so real:

"Alarm yourself with now
The dawning of the day and deliverance of night
A beautiful and blessed timescape to embrace

Marinate in the moment
Connect with self family and community
Prepare your heart and mind with expressions of gratitude
Purpose your will with the Most High"


In your piece, form comes secondary to content. I feel respected and uplifted because you used my time wisely whilst sharing wisdom and encouragement.

I really like these lines the most:

"Prepare your heart and mind with expressions of gratitude
Purpose your will with the Most High"

I really like the use of the word "with" in that last line.

Blessings,

Otto

  

Printer-friendly copy | Reply | Reply with quote | Top

    
Otto
Member since Dec 19th 2002
4624 posts
Thu Jul-17-14 12:58 PM

Click to send private message to this authorClick to view this author's profileClick to add this author to your buddy list
2. "RE: MARINATE IN THE MOMENT"
In response to Reply # 1


  

          

I forgot to add, the title is great!

  

Printer-friendly copy | Reply | Reply with quote | Top

Babynoon
Member since Dec 27th 2004
2222 posts
Fri Dec-19-14 08:22 AM

Click to send private message to this authorClick to view this author's profileClick to add this author to your buddy list
3. "RE: MARINATE IN THE MOMENT"
In response to Reply # 0


          

Re-Amped(((((((

(This account is inactive or no longer exists by user or moderators)




:hacked or spammed entry, do not responsed or send messages to this
account:: suspicious account or virus

  

Printer-friendly copy | Reply | Reply with quote | Top

Lobby Freestyle Board topic #93232 Previous topic | Next topic
Powered by DCForum+ Version 1.25
Copyright © DCScripts.com