Marinate in the moment Release the tick tock in your dome Holding you hostage to a smart phone Alarm yourself with now The dawning of the day and deliverance of night A beautiful and blessed timescape to embrace
Marinate in the moment Connect with self family and community Prepare your heart and mind with expressions of gratitude Purpose your will with the Most High
Time in a tomb of 365 days 24 hours 1st and the 15 of the month pay days Diminshes demolishes downgrades our existence Moments marinated with love have no numbers attached Be still and relish the limitless moments
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Mmmm....
I found these lines to be so real:
"Alarm yourself with now The dawning of the day and deliverance of night A beautiful and blessed timescape to embrace
Marinate in the moment Connect with self family and community Prepare your heart and mind with expressions of gratitude Purpose your will with the Most High"
In your piece, form comes secondary to content. I feel respected and uplifted because you used my time wisely whilst sharing wisdom and encouragement.
I really like these lines the most:
"Prepare your heart and mind with expressions of gratitude Purpose your will with the Most High"
I really like the use of the word "with" in that last line.