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NoDrawls McGraw
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Mon Jun-16-14 04:01 AM

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"Lust pt.5"


  

          

uhhmmm....
Your voice was like Jazz,...
...calmly playing in the background
while sippin' a gin & cranberry on a solitary lake shrouded by
the cascading leaf's of a willow-weeping tree among ducks that candidly swim by...

An intoxicating adagio breeze gently-yet-poignantly massaging the vibe of it all, ya dig...
Your caramel hue that echoed the rigorous miscegenated past of our predecessors,...
...Those melanin deposits...strategically besmirched across your face(freckles) were like a roadmap of heritage,
that which I'd die to traverse,.....such is the beauty of undying resilience......
As I dwell in a land dominated by the aesthetics of angular/linear imperialism, ....
...Babydoll, let your sensual curves be my revolution!

You Sexy Muthafukka!



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"You can take an African out of Africa, but you can't take Africa out of the African"
Afro-Americana/Afro-Caribbana/Afro-Latino unite. We are ALL Black!

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
RE: Lust pt.5
Jun 19th 2014
1
Dig dat.
Jun 21st 2014
2
RE: Lust pt.5
Jul 17th 2014
3
I can dig it....
Jul 20th 2014
4

ASIEM
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Thu Jun-19-14 08:51 PM

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1. "RE: Lust pt.5"
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exquisite verbiage yes seductive even a lady just might slide out of a sling for this

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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NoDrawls McGraw
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Sat Jun-21-14 01:27 AM

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2. "Dig dat."
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Peace & Respect Fam.




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"You can take an African out of Africa, but you can't take Africa out of the African"
Afro-Americana/Afro-Caribbana/Afro-Latino unite. We are ALL Black!

  

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Otto
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Thu Jul-17-14 01:00 PM

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3. "RE: Lust pt.5"
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Ironic piece, mainly because you are talking about the sensual nature of a body's form, and yet, the way the piece flows sort of made my head zig and zag to the beat while I was reading -- I felt like I was undressing your piece with my eyes.

-Otto

  

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NoDrawls McGraw
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Sun Jul-20-14 05:10 PM

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4. "I can dig it...."
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Very interesting way of looking at it, nahmean.

*Daps



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"You can take an African out of Africa, but you can't take Africa out of the African"
Afro-Americana/Afro-Caribbana/Afro-Latino unite. We are ALL Black!

  

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