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Clouds
Member since Jun 03rd 2011
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Sun Feb-09-14 06:20 PM

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"Shots Fired"


          

Your minds playing tricks u feel hot
with ice cold battle drills wagin war plots
bad thoughts premeditated in the storm watch
I'm noticin previous notes they loaded in
wit messages misunderstood by older men
and women
I still love like my own children
pains a past time that my minds well skilled in
as you create frame round my name for the feeling
like i should be ashamed of my passion for buildin
see no regret
I see fear and open threats
twist my words like cords to give a nigga wreck
and let my rhymes get me crimed in the court of set
bet
mind playing tricks u feel hot
wit ice cold battle drills wagin war plots
bad thoughts premeditated in ur storm watch
me in your sight picture framed for the kill shot

  

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Feb 09th 2014
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RE: Shots Fired
Feb 13th 2014
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Scagnetti
Member since Dec 15th 2012
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Sun Feb-09-14 11:36 PM

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1. "...."
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is he dead?

  

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Scagnetti
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Sun Feb-09-14 11:42 PM

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RIP beloved.

  

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ASIEM
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Thu Feb-13-14 03:43 AM

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3. "RE: Shots Fired"
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well written nice flow and graphic

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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