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Intrepid Vixen
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Mon Jan-27-14 09:15 PM

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"Butterflies"


  

          

Their coming and their passing went
as silent as a tear
rode cheeks like rosy breezes
threading through the air
and flying there
upon the shoulders of the sky
different always to an unassuming eye
and I saw
though they never noticed me at all
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When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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RE: Butterflies
Jan 29th 2014
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RE: Butterflies
Jan 29th 2014
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RE: Butterflies
Jan 31st 2014
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RE: Butterflies
Mar 03rd 2014
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serenity and calm
Jan 31st 2014
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RE: serenity and calm
Mar 03rd 2014
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ASIEM
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Wed Jan-29-14 04:16 AM

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1. "RE: Butterflies"
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"different always to an unassuming eye"

truly modesty deserves to see things as they are meant to be tho quiet

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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Intrepid Vixen
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Wed Jan-29-14 08:27 PM

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I firmly agree. Thank you for the review, darling!
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then One cannot be broken.

  

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lola1980
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Fri Jan-31-14 09:54 AM

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The beauty of the butterfly. I also favor very much this quiet unassuming delicate yet strong winged creature. Thank you for sharing your words. Here is a piece I wrote for our beautiful butterflies. Peace

A WINGED BEAUTY

Nestled in her small cocoon
She squirms and turns to find the room
A delicate dance from side to side
As nature makes her wings to fly

The outer layer of her home
Opens to a world unknown
A radiant beauty for all to see
Adorned in purple, black and green

She floats and flutters to say hello
To soaring sunflowers as they glow
Landing low in a graceful stance
Princess Butterfly begins to prance

Desta

“Writing is a potion of devotion, magical, mysterious and mighty” Desta

"Love is like the sea. It's a moving thing, but still and all, it takes its shape from the shore it meets, and it's different with every shore. ”
Zora Neale Hurston

  

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Intrepid Vixen
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Beautiful! Butterflies are my favorites insects. They are simply breathtaking to behold. I enjoyed your piece.
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then One cannot be broken.

  

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ThaAnthology
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Fri Jan-31-14 11:16 AM

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feelings evoked from this piece. Like a cold glass of water. Thank you for this.

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Intrepid Vixen
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You're very welcome. And thank you for reading it.
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then One cannot be broken.

  

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