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lola1980
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Sat Jan-04-14 11:54 AM

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"RISE -Haiku"


          

Still waters pass me
Bursting light frees my caged soul
I soar with the wind

Desta

“Writing is a potion of devotion, magical, mysterious and mighty” Desta

"Love is like the sea. It's a moving thing, but still and all, it takes its shape from the shore it meets, and it's different with every shore. ”
Zora Neale Hurston

  

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RE: RISE -Haiku
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RE: RISE -Haiku
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RE: vomit
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      RE: thanx
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blacklisted
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Intrepid Vixen
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Sat Jan-04-14 04:32 PM

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1. "RE: RISE -Haiku"
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Another good one.
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When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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lola1980
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Sun Jan-05-14 09:49 AM

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2. "RE: RISE -Haiku"
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Your feedback is appreciated. I have been inspired to write these hakius as writing prompts from a website called Creative Talent Unleashed. There is an image and I write a haiku that expresses what I see. A great way to write in the morning before the day begins. Peace and blessings to you.

“Writing is a potion of devotion, magical, mysterious and mighty” Desta

"Love is like the sea. It's a moving thing, but still and all, it takes its shape from the shore it meets, and it's different with every shore. ”
Zora Neale Hurston

  

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That's a wonderful way to reflect your talents and grow.
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When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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tycho
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Sun Jan-05-14 01:56 PM

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light as rain bond 2
dark sweeping clouds down in lift
a drunk rejects it

excellent a piece that unleashed the tongue, or is it fingers or can you hear me?

te
good read maxium overload to much to understand
god bless

  

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tycho
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duck shit open close
mouth of a river can't stop
boss from flushing u

  

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lola1980
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Surrender to love
The spirit of darkness kills
Precious souls give thanks

Desta

“Writing is a potion of devotion, magical, mysterious and mighty” Desta

"Love is like the sea. It's a moving thing, but still and all, it takes its shape from the shore it meets, and it's different with every shore. ”
Zora Neale Hurston

  

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tycho
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late moonlight heavy
egg yokes sunrise skip a beat
spring snap harps no play

sounds of yesterday
volcanic ashes ponder
empty chair breaks soul

not 2 fast 2 slow
roots turn split end family tree
a friend 2 die 4

i enjoyed it so much i wrote more hoe you also feel the happiness

  

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lola1980
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I enjoyed this very much. Many thanks to you.

Desta

“Writing is a potion of devotion, magical, mysterious and mighty” Desta

"Love is like the sea. It's a moving thing, but still and all, it takes its shape from the shore it meets, and it's different with every shore. ”
Zora Neale Hurston

  

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tycho
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do u believe truth
what if you reported crimes
to fbi and

they did nothing on
your behalf for lack of funds
should they be held um

responsible for
all the years you suffer for
them doing nothing

hell yeah their just as
guilty as the perps sweat sat
urated prisons

what if you gave up
custody should you still have
to pay support no

yes they robbed banks
accounts and denied passport
civil liberty

violations trust
has been rebuke revoked this
government a joke

provoked terrorist
actions kindle civil war
fist up fight on pills

aren't cures cover up
of symptoms problem bubble
on stop don't swallow

we must engage them
as the bible instructs us
qoute to follow christ

this is a war against wicked authorities, wicked governements, and wicked rulers in high places or dominions, principalities, and the powers of darkness revealed by the government shut down and the legalizing of gay marriage and the establishment of drunk yards look at ohio stitistics but you go to jail for smoking a little bit of theherb a seed the fruit which god ordained don't let their specch tickle your ear have faith in the unseen

peace and many blessings their is no god but god the most high
do you recall how long i been here speaking out against this wickedness well i've been fighting them since bush stole the white house and the twin towers fail now i have become jihad and the infidel blood will flow

te-te
the end to everything

respect and burn this after you read
peace :/)

update on court case they still stall took 90 days to send records now they still stall the hearing after numerous court room errors what justice but if they wanted you you would be dead and it would be legalized by their laws because you fail to listen to their commands you can't have two master or can you?

out

  

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