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lola1980
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"A Charming Display"
Thu Jan-02-14 12:11 PM by lola1980

          

Mesmerized by your colors shapes and sizes
I am a starry-eyed girl with a robust appetite for love
You wait for my gentle touch and full mouth
I carefully pick from your beauty and delight in your bounty
Ravishing red bell peppers, deep purple and egg white plants
A medley of blushing blueberries, strawberries and blackberries
Gracious green grapes and golden delicious apples
A mixture of mustard, collard and kale greens
With deeply rooted rutabaga and turnips
Indeed you are a charming display of God’s precious gems
Here’s to a healthier New Year!

Desta

“Writing is a potion of devotion, magical, mysterious and mighty” Desta

"Love is like the sea. It's a moving thing, but still and all, it takes its shape from the shore it meets, and it's different with every shore. ”
Zora Neale Hurston

  

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I love your chromaticism in this piece.
Jan 11th 2014
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ASIEM
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Fri Jan-03-14 02:56 AM

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1. "RE: A Charming Display"
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very vivid colorful and tasteful and the message inside every letter speaks to the longing for prosperity and healthy living loving and sharing

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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lola1980
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Sun Jan-05-14 09:43 AM

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Thank you for the feedback. Happy New Year.

“Writing is a potion of devotion, magical, mysterious and mighty” Desta

"Love is like the sea. It's a moving thing, but still and all, it takes its shape from the shore it meets, and it's different with every shore. ”
Zora Neale Hurston

  

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Intrepid Vixen
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Sat Jan-04-14 04:36 PM

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A beautiful cornucopia. A visual feasting of color for eyes to behold. Happy New Year indeed!
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When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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lola1980
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Sun Jan-05-14 09:46 AM

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I wrote this after viewing a beautiful display of fruits and vegetables. My attempt was to create the visual and affirm healthier eating for myself this year. Thank you for sharing your feedback with me. Much appreciation.

“Writing is a potion of devotion, magical, mysterious and mighty” Desta

"Love is like the sea. It's a moving thing, but still and all, it takes its shape from the shore it meets, and it's different with every shore. ”
Zora Neale Hurston

  

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NoDrawls McGraw
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Sat Jan-11-14 01:53 AM

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5. "I love your chromaticism in this piece."
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*Daps




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lola1980
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Mon Jan-13-14 05:09 PM

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6. "RE: I love your chromaticism in this piece."
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And I love your choice of words. Fresh!

“Writing is a potion of devotion, magical, mysterious and mighty” Desta

"Love is like the sea. It's a moving thing, but still and all, it takes its shape from the shore it meets, and it's different with every shore. ”
Zora Neale Hurston

  

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wetsalt
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Wed Jan-15-14 09:48 PM

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Ha ha u got me going again

  

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lola1980
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Good to read you were delighted you by healthy surprise. Your feed back is always appreciated Wetsalt. May you have a wonderful and healthy New Year.

Desta

“Writing is a potion of devotion, magical, mysterious and mighty” Desta

"Love is like the sea. It's a moving thing, but still and all, it takes its shape from the shore it meets, and it's different with every shore. ”
Zora Neale Hurston

  

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