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ASIEM
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Sun Oct-20-13 11:52 PM

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"just words or feelings"


  

          

perfect storms
make perfect tragedy
something to remember
when:
dark clouds pass by
divorce ends
and victims forgive

bitter is the sweet tea at table talk
gossip rots sour gut
to lay beside the enemy n hide
working last shift till morning
get high before 9

silly games played by fools summon
zombies before dawn
to rise walk in daylight
as full moon brings tide

with little hope a writer keeps the pen afloat
believing one day someone will note tis...



"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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RE: just words or feelings
Jan 25th 2014
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RE: just words or feelings
Jan 27th 2014
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RE: just words or feelings
Feb 03rd 2014
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lola1980
Member since Aug 26th 2012
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Sat Jan-25-14 07:58 AM

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1. "RE: just words or feelings"
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The opening lines are captivating and engaging as the images are clearly expressed. Your words and feelings are felt.

Desta

“Writing is a potion of devotion, magical, mysterious and mighty” Desta

"Love is like the sea. It's a moving thing, but still and all, it takes its shape from the shore it meets, and it's different with every shore. ”
Zora Neale Hurston

  

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Intrepid Vixen
Member since Nov 07th 2004
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Mon Jan-27-14 09:09 PM

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How you beautifully weave your imagery is such a joy to behold. I did notice.
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When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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treeworshipper
Member since Jul 24th 2012
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Mon Feb-03-14 11:53 AM

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really good and comes at a meaningful time for me, solar power may also Help??

  

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