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tycho
Member since May 09th 2011
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Sun Sep-15-13 01:31 PM

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"do drop inn"


          

anger from within
push over board, I'ma about to sin
attorney's play in double dutch I jumping in

red dilated pupils rage
I lost my scruples playing scrabble
the words are all jumble

thinking I could win
asking god to end
this pain and suffering,
it just began again

standing in front of honor
on a twisted tilted scale images of hell
no I wont fail roll a l

jail bail rejected request by mail
nail them to the cross
appeal the lost
support the voice of the people become boss

but first act your age
respect the crooked's cage
write you troubles on the page

bring it to life mages weapon
illusions of truth
alphabet becomes wards trust
the voice bust a lost train of thought
caught an impression
a test form on high
and i haven't even let go hanging of a halo
a horn of salvation
how can he save a nation
but the nation burns?
ashes in earns
young ladies turn to patrol the block
money for licking cocks

time tocks and lost a tick birth of a trick
cops still acting like dicks
court rooms make me sick
judges picking sides based on your action but your actions aint on trial but judged the same it's a game

and i'm bringing the rukus because this system think they can fuck us
commonwealth property troops naughty bringing body bags to a revealation crow picnic eating the flesh of scorpion kings tasting like bull shit ever time he speaks
three baliff's the bench remains weak
tweek a a court report pinky and the brains leak
speech of devils lingo
demurrers motions and summons bring forth death
conjuring up shadows
negative left signs and stop signs in hind view
propel self to become gods

the book said in psalms we are all gods and goddesses
so why are we biond under the great leviathen dragon over the proud america the proud knock down babylons war towers rip of the arms of the state it wont be consider hate but a predestine date to slaughter the devil and restore order order is none existant but her comes her older sister i'm miss her

whatever
out

King of Kings shalom
get understanding

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
RE: do drop inn
Sep 15th 2013
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RE: =peace bro that is if you are a guy?
Sep 18th 2013
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RE: do drop inn
Sep 21st 2013
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RE: do drop inn
Sep 24th 2013
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The_Rebellion
Member since Mar 19th 2010
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Sun Sep-15-13 09:28 PM

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1. "RE: do drop inn"
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I like this a lot, it would be better if you would clean up the grammar/spelling a bit and In my option use less line breaks but honestly who am I to tell u how to write something that comes from your soul. All in all, I enjoyed reading it

THE REBELLION

This Is Where It All Ends...The Reign Of Terror Will Finally Be Over...THE REBELLION HAS COME!!!!

If You Want To Reach Me, Link My E-Mail "The--Rebellion@hotmail.com", Or Private Message Me.

  

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tycho
Member since May 09th 2011
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Wed Sep-18-13 10:35 AM

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2. "RE: =peace bro that is if you are a guy?"
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thanks for the constructive criticism
Man but for real i"m not into writng just
release a bit of anger that's all.

I'm glad you enjoyed it

shalom and may god give you acts of venegence against his and our enemies victorious we will stand on final judgement day

out
keep tracking the enemy and taking notes to feed the next generation if we do no see change in this life time

  

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HueyNewton
Member since Feb 27th 2005
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Sat Sep-21-13 01:19 PM

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3. "RE: do drop inn"
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enjoy the vocab here it paints a vivid picture, nice one {}

across 110th street
-xxx

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

  

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tycho
Member since May 09th 2011
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Tue Sep-24-13 11:43 AM

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4. "RE: do drop inn"
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thanks bro
stay up

shalom and stay blessed with love from on high we all are prescious in the eye of the storm

  

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