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Dogstar
Member since May 04th 2013
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Tue Jul-16-13 11:10 AM

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"More Mental Events"


  

          

life is individual blues hidden visible
in the midst of the cruel and the critical who ridicule
at my pursuit of peace indivisible and inner truth
a multitude of paths that collapse you get into
a maze built with hate full of traps i went through
now the brain is wonderful...thing superficial
and this pain is the only peace you take with you
my train of thought full of gems from a trained mental
wit
lessons of love lost in warz it change into
pursuing happiness at a battlefield venue
and when you think it just finna let up be continued
to work in world without ignorin the one within you
conjure the monumental by walkin the path im meant to
when every day a test fuck whats next on the menu
the effort that i give you a piece of me plain and simple
I keep it a million in the morning meditate the middle
you right I never left how i function from the center
they fakin the fundamentals resembelin great pretenders
I befriend my obstacles fearing no offender
agenda
remember I promised not to surrender

  

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RE: More Mental Events
Jul 16th 2013
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lola1980
Member since Aug 26th 2012
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Tue Jul-16-13 12:26 PM

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Mentally profound and sound word-art Dogstar. I enjoyed the tone and movement of this piece. Thank you for sharing.

“Writing is a potion of devotion, magical, mysterious and mighty” Desta

"Love is like the sea. It's a moving thing, but still and all, it takes its shape from the shore it meets, and it's different with every shore. ”
Zora Neale Hurston

  

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