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ak_reborn
Member since Sep 24th 2005
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Sat Jun-01-13 07:59 PM

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"twenty two and up"


  

          




I wont lie to you..I thought about this life and how its purpose isn't worth it less you find yourself a wife,
found myself alive barely breathing, i tried to cleanse my body but depression is a lesion,
repressed feelings made it worse and even further is the demons tryna poison any positive energy I'm feeling,
i relate to suicidal minded people who acc did it they aren't crazy or conceded they just knew too much and hid it,
see i brew too much and sip it, love this liquor but it steals all the brain cells replaced by this memory i build,
this aint meant to be a film, no arc, no applause?
but why my people poor stuck living for the cause?
its hard to persevere when you stuck inside a hole but already I achieved more than anyone i know,
so this henney i condone, whats next? blurry visions,
i think death is the only promise of a blessing for the living.




Intoxication, my voicebox rocks the nation
Sweet affiliation, the Doe Or Die situation - Az

  

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RE: twenty two and up
Jun 02nd 2013
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RE: twenty two and up
Jun 20th 2013
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PhotoSynthesis
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Sun Jun-02-13 08:03 PM

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1. "RE: twenty two and up"
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It's been awhile since I've seen "your" ish. It has a matured/polished, raw (experienced) feel to it.

My how you've grown!

*Life Imitates Art*

So are you 22 now?

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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HueyNewton
Member since Feb 27th 2005
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Thu Jun-20-13 03:08 PM

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2. "RE: twenty two and up"
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metaphors, wordstyle, & delivery is A-1, real nice flow!

across 110th street
-xxx

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

  

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