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HueyNewton
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Wed May-29-13 02:22 PM

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raindrops FALL like tear drops, contagious musicians a valuable
technique like Coltrane
collard greens & fried chicken, cornbread in Harlem
does anyone pay rent here?

nasdaq fired him over negative economy stats on wallstreet!
my mental disorder is deranged, of course it is . .
Julio's boogie down bodega is where the coffee consumption
takes place, only the strong stuff, Julio (he laughs)
yep the rent is too high over there!

not guilty, no guilty is what house member debates
my friend attorney general Holder wants social media reform
to be born from rhetoric, of course!
I reflect on lessons learned livin' la vida loca in Los Angeles
blood$, crip$, ese'$, the cholo that rolls dolo & sticky greens!

writers reborn after Langston&Baldwin cuz their EYES were
always watching God, of course . .
the temperature is 80 degrees and I can't find my watch!
allow me to take my pills, perhaps not today, just playin'
and they say, I have a vocabulary disordeR

lifE imitates art
-xxx

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

  

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RE: vocabulary disordeR
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PhotoSynthesis
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Sun Jun-02-13 08:09 PM

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*DisOrderly Conduct*

You should be arrested for the development of this "Wordplay" and storyline!


~Killer~

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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ASIEM
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Wed Dec-18-13 02:31 PM

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again i will say there is always a jazz blues feel to your writing that makes the harmony the rhythm and each line a masterpiece

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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wetsalt
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Yes I do hear echoes of LH

  

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Intrepid Vixen
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Wed Jan-01-14 04:03 PM

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I read this like a multi-cultural lens of vignettes. Different things going on with different people all captured elegantly with musicality being the fine thread weaving it altogether. Simply lovely!
~~~~~~~~
When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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