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ak_reborn
Member since Sep 24th 2005
1668 posts
Fri Mar-29-13 10:18 PM

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"Come at me"


  

          




Snuff what you know i been here for my own views, never got the cred for the work that i post to..
the board I absorbed all the critics and folk who, trashed what i wrote when i spoke on my locals,
i rose to the task... still seventeen with miles on the clock putting time in the graft..
literary reading while scheming on corners,
obituary breeding through seasons of dawning, crimes,
warlords forced my decline,
academic ventures conforming to signs of increase,
spiritual and mental,
only got praise for the work-rate not for the pencil,
regional out-cast, out-rage at-last,
throttle my gauge with a page for an out-blast,
many here out-classed, old and out-dated,
jealous of works I've displayed in...
worse is i kept this place still alive while the veterans 'better' than me left why?
still aint considered as high,
a flickered flame taunted by obnoxious air will reply,
bitter in abundance, consider me redundant,
or crown me the best for the sentences structured,
rap with a rawness of aura, the purest since Christ,carried the Cross to Golgotha,
what brought this upon me? honestly?
either...lack of respect or lack of acknowledgment,
see this as censored cause Caesar is centered on seizing the region for okay's apology,
preview my prophecy to rise as the rigorous rider in rhythm and biters can mimics this, probably.

Intoxication, my voicebox rocks the nation
Sweet affiliation, the Doe Or Die situation - Az

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
RE: 1ox
Mar 30th 2013
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RE: Come at me
Mar 30th 2013
2
RE: Come at me
May 01st 2013
3

tycho
Member since May 09th 2011
478 posts
Sat Mar-30-13 12:26 PM

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1. "RE: 1ox"
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spoiled outburst and truth hurts
fat kids burps:




Ke$ha's 'My Crazy Beautiful Life' Gets Emotional

folklores society is bored of raps
and rappers turing all kids into nigger
stupid dumb and nice wonder woman with a knife
that's life
praising idols grinding on corners get clap
at american bandstand gong gay right seals
more right then most punching clocks
god is making flamable rocks
stolen goods hocked


believe me pantha's ain't shock
when everythings pink it stinks rubbed out
and erased on okayplayer
sooth sayers for what they can take but never give
so how can an isolated butterfly live
in a cacoon of skip overs
decomposing structure
and banana republic dressed up
in iceberg that melts into a watery tear flow
heaven upon heaven and the yolk
of fragil eggs is light in syrup

but battle on and believe in self is the only
concrete bloack that wont be tossed sony
sold out and went digital
now everybody lacks an eagle
seven time tiger gave the people
championships and soon he will fade
i'm glad you played the part
and acting out was smart never follow the heard

have you herd the herb that is barred from religion practice on bro develope that mj three but he wasn't nothing without pip
and the team one is good but none is better
dissovle into the flock camouflage without it be shot a king and a dream collapse back into violated civil rights
i'm right you right on point

it's going to be trouble
be prepared?

  

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wetsalt
Member since Sep 21st 2012
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Sat Mar-30-13 09:14 PM

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2. "RE: Come at me"
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... not sure of the history u speak of but props for this piece ...

  

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Homicidal Crook
Member since Dec 05th 2002
807 posts
Wed May-01-13 02:07 AM

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3. "RE: Come at me"
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I'll come at you cuz you wack and you think that you can rap
You's a dollar to a stack trying to make up racks
You couldn't posses the intelligence to make raps eloquent
make fans relish it so stop with your embellishments
Beggin for credit like your literature relevant
The impact of yo rhymes is a miniature elephant
I kill you with lines filled with lyrical elegance
And show you I define the most intricate penmanship
And you lack the skill to over will the incredulous
pestering the veterans for approval and membership
Ain't no one respecting that you question the hesitance
acting all sensitive cuz you can't pencil up excellence
You a lame in the game your bars exude it so effortless
Not to mention that ya corny on a level that is measureless
If you had a following all that would happen is a exodus
while I walk on waters that even Jesus feels is treacherous

Only God can judge me - 2Pac

  

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