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lola1980
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""To Love and Be Loved""
Sun Nov-04-12 06:35 PM by lola1980

          

“To Love and Be Loved”

Yesterday we flowed freely
For the first time in months
I was open and you were receptive
No longer walking a tightrope with a heavy heart
The noise in between the silence was lifted
An elixir of honestly removed
The sound bites, small talk and strained conversations
Transitions and choices had been made
Our spirits were in sync and agreed
No push or pull
Less of you Less of me More of God
Will create a better we
As I learn how to love and be loved


Desta

“Writing is a potion of devotion, magical, mysterious and mighty” Desta

"Love is like the sea. It's a moving thing, but still and all, it takes its shape from the shore it meets, and it's different with every shore. ”
Zora Neale Hurston

  

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RE: "To Love and Be Loved"
Nov 07th 2012
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RE: "To Love and Be Loved"
Nov 15th 2012
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RE: "To Love and Be Loved"
Nov 16th 2012
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RE: "To Love and Be Loved"
Nov 17th 2012
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Street Poet
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Wed Nov-07-12 10:57 PM

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1. "RE: "To Love and Be Loved""
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Love and relationships are a powerful combo, great writing.

  

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ASIEM
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Thu Nov-15-12 09:36 PM

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soul powerful perfect moments lend themselves to us for times when memories just may not be enough to believe we are worthy...your writing is so full of honesty and true life experiences in short snippets great work

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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lola1980
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Fri Nov-16-12 04:04 PM

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3. "RE: "To Love and Be Loved""
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Fri Nov-16-12 04:07 PM by lola1980

          

Extreme appreciation for the feedback. The journey of love is a beautiful and powerful life experience especially when lived truthfully...no more secrets.

Desta

“Writing is a potion of devotion, magical, mysterious and mighty” Desta

"Love is like the sea. It's a moving thing, but still and all, it takes its shape from the shore it meets, and it's different with every shore. ”
Zora Neale Hurston

  

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Babynoon
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Sat Nov-17-12 11:00 AM

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Does it simply mean that one or both has matured?
Or one has become weaker? And gave up the fight to accept being loved and or, receiving it?

Forgive my loss fore I lost balance and gained it back by
Letting go in order to live without


Translations; I like your piece, thanks

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