On the tip of your
"I love you"
is where I find my thrill.
Catch me when I fall.
Hug me when I stand tall.
Believe in us
when the quitters
teach us how to give up.
As long as the plan is to
overcome, then we can never fail.
I love you too.

I find these lines the strongest:

>On the tip of your
>"I love you"
>is where I find my thrill.

>Believe in us
>when the quitters
>teach us how to give up.

You can almost craft haikus out of those. Excellent message, very strong wordplay.



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Enjoyed the delivery

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Icehawks

Sweet...very sweet. Thank you for sharing these words Street Poet.

Desta

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"Love is like the sea. It's a moving thing, but still and all, it takes its shape from the shore it meets, and it's different with every shore. ”
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