"True Love Set Free"


“True Love Set Free”

Tightly tucked away in distant places and spaces
We found our way back into each other's heart
Minutes hours days and months have passed
I find myself wanting you more

The steady flame that warms my soul
You inspire my flow and brighten my eyes
Maybe this is all a fantasy
Being played out with a very real love

For my true love is you
I, you and we are real
Although distance keeps us apart
I wake and sleep with you in my head and heart

This morning I woke
Your spirit whispered sweetly
It is time to let go now
Gently and lovingly
You set me free

Desta

“Writing is a potion of devotion, magical, mysterious and mighty” Desta

"Love is like the sea. It's a moving thing, but still and all, it takes its shape from the shore it meets, and it's different with every shore. ”
Zora Neale Hurston

"yes it is true"

i felt you when floating h2o was deep
you felt me while you sleep
caressing your feet
the spirit made us meet
how sweet aroma drifting us sweeping


across astro plains and poetry song sheets
true love set free in calm sky
i dont try to understand
i trust your words fantasy
set free love true?

Thank you for your words and yes true love should be set free; not caputured, controlled and based on unreasonble conditions.

“Writing is a potion of devotion, magical, mysterious and mighty” Desta

"Love is like the sea. It's a moving thing, but still and all, it takes its shape from the shore it meets, and it's different with every shore. ”
Zora Neale Hurston

This feels bittersweet, with a heavy emphasis on the sweet. Well crafted.

"To be a poet is a condition, not a profession."
- Robert Frost

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Thank you for your feedback and yes true love is be bittersweet. I prefer to be reminded of the sweetness. In my opinion it doesn't make letting go easier or less painful; however it allows me to be grateful for having experienced the sweetness of true love and that it is mine to have freely if I beleive.

“Writing is a potion of devotion, magical, mysterious and mighty” Desta

"Love is like the sea. It's a moving thing, but still and all, it takes its shape from the shore it meets, and it's different with every shore. ”
Zora Neale Hurston

a saying is, if u love something set it free, this reflects it, nice!

across 110th street
-xxx

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

and if it comes back it's meant to be

Desta

“Writing is a potion of devotion, magical, mysterious and mighty” Desta

"Love is like the sea. It's a moving thing, but still and all, it takes its shape from the shore it meets, and it's different with every shore. ”
Zora Neale Hurston

Love has taken the gun and
shot itself away from sharing
with that brother

Motherless child, it's
un-nurtured soul turned
cold and apparently
dead.

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