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Street Poet
Member since Jun 07th 2002
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Sat Oct-06-12 10:03 PM

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"Good Men"


          

Demonized
by the broken hearts and minds
of many women.

Our kind have been swept into
the pile of bad ones
by her broom that she calls
"I will not be hurt again"

When we come into their lives
they are so happy to be with us,
but their insecurities
are always working triple shifts.

Now you're punished
for another man's lashings.
Next thing you know its over
and she's singing a tune
That starts with

"I had a good one, but I didn't know what to do with him"

  

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RE: Good Men
Oct 07th 2012
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RE: Good Men
Oct 12th 2012
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RE: Good Men
Oct 27th 2012
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tycho
Member since May 09th 2011
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Sun Oct-07-12 12:21 PM

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1. "RE: Good Men"
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nice writing
but it goes both ways
i am a good man now but i once had a good girl
when i was billy bad azz

but first i had to work threw what was causing me to act that way
issues with all the women in my life since child hood it works so they would have to work threw all the issue since childhood dealing with men and me really aren't good listeners so we have to strive to become better at that instead of seeking pleasure whatever this is lame

peace

  

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ASIEM
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Fri Oct-12-12 12:09 PM

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2. "RE: Good Men"
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wow a present truth in time becomes a memory that proves essential

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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HueyNewton
Member since Feb 27th 2005
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Sat Oct-27-12 01:18 PM

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truth is light, but it does apply to both sexes, good one!

lifE imitates art
-xxx

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

  

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