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Street Poet
Member since Jun 07th 2002
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Thu Sep-20-12 10:32 PM

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"The Imagery"


          

The sky is the color of forever.
No sex appeal
but she said my presence
gets her wetter.
Fall's jacket
is
a prelude
to
Winter's Sweater.

Can't fly
but the hawk is in my chest.
Dreamed
I was swimming in sin
and a heathen
threw me a life preserver
that said God Bless.

A poem molded me
from pessimistic clay.
Sonnets, Villanelles
"No idea's original"
chanted the Zombies
from hell.

I kissed love
and she bit my lip.
Blood everywhere
on some low budget movie
SyFy Channel shit.
A symbol of power
like a clenched fist.
I caressed happiness
she turned around
and said
"You gotta pay for this."


  

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Extremely vivid Dukez!
Sep 21st 2012
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RE: The Imagery
Sep 22nd 2012
2
RE: The Imagery
Sep 23rd 2012
3

NoDrawls McGraw
Member since Jun 24th 2007
12122 posts
Fri Sep-21-12 02:03 PM

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1. "Extremely vivid Dukez!"
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...and I dig the way you personified the seasons.


iLL.






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"You can take an African out of Africa, but you can't take Africa out of the African"
Afro-Americana/Afro-Caribbana/Afro-Latino unite. We are ALL Black!

  

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wetsalt
Member since Sep 21st 2012
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Sat Sep-22-12 11:46 AM

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2. "RE: The Imagery"
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Yes!!

  

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ASIEM
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Sun Sep-23-12 11:04 PM

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3. "RE: The Imagery"
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I can actually see this happening conversation and all well written

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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