Printer-friendly copy Email this topic to a friend
Lobby Freestyle Board topic #91621

Subject: "Untitled" Previous topic | Next topic
Street Poet
Member since Jun 07th 2002
662 posts
Thu Aug-16-12 12:37 AM

Click to send email to this author Click to send private message to this authorClick to view this author's profileClick to add this author to your buddy list
"Untitled"


          

Is it blasphemous if I look up to the heavens and say "What up God?"
Overgrown poems in my mind, time to cut the creativity like green grass sod
I write on paper, think on neurons, and recite on energy of the people
Watching these creatures without a reasonable doubt partake in D'evils
Been to the darkest side of the mind, that's why I always enjoy the sunshine
I can feel the depression pulling on the back of my perception of life
Saying come back it'll be better next time like an ex ready to be a wife
Love will forever be supreme but most refuse to Acknowledge the 'Trane
Insane is the new sane I never looked at relationships like a game
Life is too short to spend on someone that doesn't plan on staying for a while
When I die I want to say I didn't frown as much as I smiled

  

Printer-friendly copy | Reply | Reply with quote | Top


Topic Outline
Subject Author Message Date ID
RE: Untitled
Aug 18th 2012
1
RE: Untitled
Aug 22nd 2012
2
RE: Untitled
Sep 15th 2012
3

HueyNewton
Member since Feb 27th 2005
1923 posts
Sat Aug-18-12 01:12 PM

Click to send email to this author Click to send private message to this authorClick to view this author's profileClick to add this author to your buddy list
1. "RE: Untitled"
In response to Reply # 0


          

real cool vibe the direction u went with this piece, enjoyed!

guilty of everything
-xxx

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

  

Printer-friendly copy | Reply | Reply with quote | Top

ASIEM
Charter member
4154 posts
Wed Aug-22-12 11:23 AM

Click to send email to this author Click to send private message to this authorClick to view this author's profileClick to add this author to your buddy list
2. "RE: Untitled"
In response to Reply # 0


  

          

Street Poet caught a glimpse of reality I actually think you could develop this more cause it depicts so many images it left me wanting more...so feed me you have an audience

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




www.myspace.com/asiem61

  

Printer-friendly copy | Reply | Reply with quote | Top

    
ak_reborn
Member since Sep 24th 2005
1668 posts
Sat Sep-15-12 11:12 PM

Click to send email to this author Click to send private message to this authorClick to view this author's profileClick to add this author to your buddy list
3. "RE: Untitled"
In response to Reply # 2


  

          


Really liked this, the jay Z reference was cool too.

Intoxication, my voicebox rocks the nation
Sweet affiliation, the Doe Or Die situation - Az

  

Printer-friendly copy | Reply | Reply with quote | Top

Lobby Freestyle Board topic #91621 Previous topic | Next topic
Powered by DCForum+ Version 1.25
Copyright © DCScripts.com