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robynwildchild
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Thu Jun-14-12 12:26 AM

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"In a Cloud"


  

          

We are all equal before the power of creation
Who needs Retinal if you've already had a vision
We represent ourselves within all the faces of a nation
…. All tied to each other through a process of oxidization
Realize your part and be patient
in dealing with situations which provide amicable atmospheric information

It's rather amazin'
that lighting never strikes the same place twice
that no 2 snowflakes are alike
Fingerprints or bites

Stuck in this big fantastic place
Arranged neatly and predictably and a-round
like a cloud that's a mass of frozen liquid crystals
constantly combining with several variant chemicals
all together like one big unit of measurement

Expand the basics of all the major elements
and ask stuff like
Do you ever throw things while your having sex?
Do you flirt on a daily basis?
Do you find that people want you smile all the time?
What is a dime?
A big bang theory of starry nights
from the earth .. to the moon, Alice
We're all equally crazy here.

~~~~~~~~ luv R.

psycho.
"Institutions encourage us to consider the opinions they sell as "facts" and that we "believe" rather than question the morality they pitch."
cities need fewer shopping malls and more skateboarders.

  

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nicceee!
Jun 15th 2012
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RE: In a Cloud
Jun 30th 2012
2
i liked this part
Jul 08th 2012
3
liked the closing...
Jul 10th 2012
4

ThaAnthology
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Fri Jun-15-12 08:25 AM

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flowed well, dug the imagery and rhythm.

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HueyNewton
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Sat Jun-30-12 01:07 PM

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2. "RE: In a Cloud"
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agreed, ya images paint a visual that describes the ideas in simple
wordz, nice flow!

a decade of struggle
-xxx

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

  

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Ezzsential
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Sun Jul-08-12 05:04 PM

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It's rather amazin'
that lighting never strikes the same place twice
that no 2 snowflakes are alike
Fingerprints or bites

keep up the goof werk..1



I’d rather sojourn into self till I reached the epitome of spiritual splendor
Haters fender bender beat down and ostracize the dreamer
But its more than dreams when the inner light is revealed through the cracks of façade-stephanie (me)

  

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KnowOne
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Tue Jul-10-12 10:37 AM

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>A big bang theory of starry nights
>from the earth .. to the moon, Alice
>We're all equally crazy here.

nice...

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