God put us back together
and I ain't mad about it.
We took a hiatus.
Love can be too intense sometimes.
It can make you run from those
who love you the most.
A reintroduction to the cold world
can provide clarity
about who we want in our lives
and who can give us that warmth.
A duality between the body and soul.
Love isn't a chemical reaction.
It's a decision to stand by the person
who wants to write their life story with you.
Make me feel like we did when we first fell in love.
Take me.

I felt this. I loed your tone and the strength of feeling. Nice work. and congrats!

*sidenote- as far as the technical stuff, I don't think it needed the last line. Kinda summed it up in the previous line, but nonetheless good work!

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I have to agree with ThaAnthology ... the tone of this pCe was strong & firm -- while at the same time *HeartWarming* & Smile~Inducing.

And tho you could've left off that last line "TAKE ME" ... it kinda wrapped it up and brought us back to the Subject title ... so I ain't mad atcha! --


*Felt*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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while the piece is all together poignant I have to say these words stood alone

"Love isn't a chemical reaction.
It's a decision to stand by the person
who wants to write their life story with you."

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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Thank you all for your comments