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ASIEM
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"My Muse left me"
Tue May-29-12 01:53 PM by ASIEM

  

          

My Muse left me to write on my own
She packed her bags made a prayer
and said these words
Live and Love Hard Today
she spoke in earnest truth
knowing you can do this
you really don't need me
do what you do
that's what I heard
tho it's not what she actually said.

My muse left me today
she said there had already been enough time spent
making words fly across screens
letters playing in the wind of my dreams
she asked me from inside my thoughts
if i really believed
if not, then,
it all had been for naught

here i am with a keyboard beneath
my fingers nimble
mind swollen with possibilities
i heard the call in the wind
speak to the voice
listen to that baby growing
inside her mothers womb
tell the story of that boy
away from his family
waiting to know his love is real
tell them bout those children
those women with feelings captured in a maze
of fears keeping them from believing
nor ever touching who I am

my muse left me
with words
from her heart
letting me know
she believed
in me
but i had to believe in myself






"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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RE: My Muse left me
May 29th 2012
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RE: My Muse left me
May 30th 2012
2
RE: My Muse left me
Jun 02nd 2012
3
PHOTO<HUEY>BESTPArt thank you
Jun 03rd 2012
4
RE: PHOTO<HUEY>BESTPArt thank you
Nov 03rd 2012
6
I mos def enjoyed this
Jun 07th 2012
5

PhotoSynthesis
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Tue May-29-12 10:36 PM

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1. "RE: My Muse left me"
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>my muse left me
>with words
>from her heart
>letting me know
>she believed
>in me
>but i had to believe in myself


Awesome closure ... wrapped up tight! --



*Melancholy Flow*



A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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HueyNewton
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Wed May-30-12 02:12 PM

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2. "RE: My Muse left me"
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the expression in the words reflect past thoughts, good flow {}

shootin' up harlem in my veins
-xxx

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

  

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the_best_part
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at the second stanza i paused. highlighted it. intended to post it in this reply. then i kept reading. and in it's entirety, this is breath taking.

@asiaradiant

  

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ASIEM
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4. "PHOTO<HUEY>BESTPArt thank you"
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I am grabbing a few "throwbacks" placing them alongside some contemporary stuff and watching if they too may still get some play (feedback)

ASIEM
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1359 posts Dec-08-04, 02:19 AM (EST)

"i feel something"

i feel something...
to identify it i must
travel in time
to a place where there was
something i could taste
something i could hold
something i could smell
yes i have to reach into the hand of time
and ask what is this i am
feeling seeing inside the outside of me?
i am wandering
i am wondering
i am looking
searching
peering
in need
of an answer
to what it is i am feeling...
the stars shine and
the moon instructs
the sun radiates
and leads me by day
through the clouds of mine own
heart and mind
i am feeling something
change is on the horizon
zion is watching
and the new jerusalem
has been built
the apocolypse
has already begun
soon visionaries
will go blind and seer'ers
look no more for guidance
temporal waters rage
as oceans seas and rivers bring messages
from the deepest places
there is energy
at the wellspring of life
and the minds of madmen sing
and laugh at the children born
to the richest generation of man
i am feeling something
purging poets to write
teach the people from inside the caverns
of your souls
reach the people and stop making
words bring forth spiritual death
to the listener...ah ha
there is the title
of new ballads
written to steal love
instead of inspiring it to be...
all is never lost as well as there is life in this thought...
i feel something/////////////////////////

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




www.myspace.com/asiem61

  

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lola1980
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Sat Nov-03-12 08:22 AM

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6. "RE: PHOTO<HUEY>BESTPArt thank you"
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Powerful, proverbial, prophetic...timeless. Continue to write the right, the wrong the truth.

Desta

“Writing is a potion of devotion, magical, mysterious and mighty” Desta

"Love is like the sea. It's a moving thing, but still and all, it takes its shape from the shore it meets, and it's different with every shore. ”
Zora Neale Hurston

  

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ThaAnthology
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subtle, but eloquent. I digs.

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