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PhotoSynthesis
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"( ( ( Night Lights ) ) )"


  

          

The night air flares like solar …
… Tastes like cola …
…… chills like polar …
Sippin’ streams of moonbeams …
Inhaling dreams thru my controller
But sleep don’t come easy with brisk winds so breezy
Electric currents create chaos …
Culminating like cumulus clouds
Satellites seeking solace …
Sneak thru trolling smoke in shrouds
Beats inside my head could wake the dead
… (((Extremely Loud)))! …
Never~The~Less …
Life’s game of chess creates mad strategies while I doze
I checkmate fate cuz I relate in stances no one knows
Streaming flows …
Hybrid mixxxed
Dreaming glows …
Fluorescent fixxxed
Eighty sixed the night … Wit' sunshine soaring like a kite
Under rolling thunder … Makes ONE wonder: "Where’s the ~LIGHT~ ?!?
Seeking salient alchemy … that ministry of chemistry
No doubt it’s stormy synergy that pumps my thoughts with energy
But I must sleep … therefore I creep
Under inky skies resplendent
My mind is calm as I sing my Psalms
Pillow soft dreams dependent

Sunsets kiss starlights ... as I bid you: GOOD NIGHT! --


A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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nice visions
Apr 30th 2012
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RE: ( ( ( Night Lights ) ) )
May 01st 2012
2
RE: ( ( ( Night Lights ) ) )
May 02nd 2012
3
I'm diggin' this....
May 04th 2012
4
RE: ( ( ( Night Lights ) ) )
May 05th 2012
5
^ YOU Guys ^ (and gals) Are Much Appreciated ...
May 06th 2012
6
RE: ( ( ( Night Lights ) ) )
May 06th 2012
7
My Libido Wears a Tuxedo ....
May 13th 2012
8

Ezzsential
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Mon Apr-30-12 10:29 PM

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1. "nice visions"
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was like a breath of fresh night air...

semantics softer than couples at wedding alters
this cops and robbers
and u cant hold a candle
rip ur antlers off and hang them on my mantle
str8 rambo--rocket science wouldnt even try it
these dudes cant compare their focus is on a diet~me

  

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Vayaiah Sunduh
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Tue May-01-12 10:56 AM

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2. "RE: ( ( ( Night Lights ) ) )"
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With all of the lights
I'm sure you closed the blinds up
and found rest

I did in this unique piece


You're the Queen of expressing )

Exodus

  

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ASIEM
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3. "RE: ( ( ( Night Lights ) ) )"
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your play with words landscapes weather patterns and the periods of day and night all mixxx somehow in these blend of complex simple worlds of chaos anticipating calm quiet sleep rest inspired by "Night Lights" u do what u do in the voice all your own still this is work that has to be read to appreciate the art of Writing hence "xx" n verbage

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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NoDrawls McGraw
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Fri May-04-12 02:28 PM

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4. "I'm diggin' this...."
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Extremely visual.


Peace.


http://chriswind.bandcamp.com/track/da-raw


"The more you reveal of yourself to the spirit-of-the-thing, the more the spirit-of-the-thing will reveal of itself to you" -Miyamoto Musashi

  

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HueyNewton
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Sat May-05-12 03:12 PM

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5. "RE: ( ( ( Night Lights ) ) )"
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a molotov of melodies which delight the reader once again, nice!

guilty of everything
-xxx

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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6. "^ YOU Guys ^ (and gals) Are Much Appreciated ..."
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*Thank U For Peeping* ... and responding! ... *Smiles*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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Nowachaoticthing
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Sun May-06-12 08:26 PM

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7. "RE: ( ( ( Night Lights ) ) )"
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Wow! Seems like someone has spring fever!

You have a knack for stringing words together to make it seem like effortless flow, but I see you. I see the artistry, the skill. As I said, I see you clearly through your words. Impressive, as always!


"To be a poet is a condition, not a profession."
- Robert Frost

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PhotoSynthesis
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8. "My Libido Wears a Tuxedo ...."
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Really Barry?!?!? --- Totally Awesome Blog Spot!

Napowrimo 2012 Poetry on ^POINT^ ...


My eyes were drinking in your words like an alcoholic~ -- *LoL*


A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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