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Nowachaoticthing
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"The New American Dream"


  

          


Bring me your huddled masses yearning to breathe free,
So that I might asphyxiate them and coolly call it fair dealing

I am everything foretold of the Rapture, in all its glory
Only the exact opposite, and without a hint of irony

I am the red line on the sign that reads as such:
“You must be this tall to ride Lady Justice,”
Anyone who comes up short triggers the guillotine

I am the prize that rewards shady dealings
As long as I get a lucrative kickback in return
Kinda like a pimp or a crooked DEA agent
Screw me and feel the sting of my backhand
Or worse; feel the cool steel of my justice

I am the law of equivalent exchange
Perverted, beaten, sodomized and tricked-out
To the most discriminating influential Johns

I am the system of loopholes and unpaved potholes
Designed to consume the broken remains of the nameless
So that they’re no longer public eyesores in my utopia

I erase what is already invisible.

I am the sliding scale powered only by gold and privilege
I am splendiferous bureaucracy and idiotic letter of the law
I am the thorny rod for those who dare to dream

I am the absurdity of criminalizing mothers with the audacity of hope

I ensure that the have-nots register their nots
And enforce that their have-nots are not legally binding
In accordance with the Law of Nots,
Ensuring that their nots
Are not someone else’s have-nots

Or God forbid, another’s have-somes

I am the waking, walking,
Living, breathing,
Relentless, incessant
Nightmare of the voiceless who find
Far too little comfort in the charity of others

I am the New American Dream

(Inspired by this heart-wrenching story: http://news.yahoo.com/s/yblog_thelookout/20110425/us_yblog_thelookout/rally-for-prosecuted-homeless-mom-who-sent-son-to-a-better-school-district)



"To be a poet is a condition, not a profession."
- Robert Frost

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Subject Author Message Date ID
you know how I feel about this one, but...
May 15th 2011
1
RE: you know how I feel about this one, but...
Jun 18th 2012
2
You shape your anger
Jun 19th 2012
3
How Did I Miss This?!?!?
Jun 22nd 2012
4

mindful
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1. "you know how I feel about this one, but..."
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I must say again... The last two stanzas are truly what make the poem. There is a great show of honesty, brutal in fact & disgruntled emotion which makes it all the more better. I'm glad you posted this here.

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Nowachaoticthing
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2. "RE: you know how I feel about this one, but..."
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This this resonates with me...

"To be a poet is a condition, not a profession."
- Robert Frost

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ThaAnthology
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and disappointment very well. Poignant and true. Thanks for this peace.

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4. "How Did I Miss This?!?!?"
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Fri Jun-22-12 11:32 AM by PhotoSynthesis

  

          

>I am the waking, walking,
>Living, breathing,
>Relentless, incessant
>Nightmare of the voiceless who find
>Far too little comfort in the charity of others


^This^ should be published! ... Somewhere ... Anywhere ... where bleeding eyes and itching ears can see and HEAR!



*Timeless Classic*


A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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