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Diffident Alchemist
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Fri Jul-09-10 02:20 AM

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".delusion."


  

          

this world of things,
all wordless in their own
language, that speaks
all about us.
us, left to wonder
how to navigate
the verbiage seen
but never heard,
never to be afforded
understanding and,
therefore, we imagine...

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{Alchemy:A medieval chemical philosophy having as its asserted aims the transmutation of base metals into gold.}

  

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RE: .delusion.
Jul 09th 2010
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RE: .delusion.
Jul 09th 2010
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I like this
Jul 11th 2010
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RE: .delusion.
Jul 20th 2010
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ASIEM
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Fri Jul-09-10 12:43 PM

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1. "RE: .delusion."
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imagination scene
in minds eye
beams of light
transcending time
through I
one life seen
after sunset
expressions at dawn
send them a letter at a time
making clear images
a message true
blow the horn
ring the bell
call from voice
till all turn
and bow
this WORD lives...selah

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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Diffident Alchemist
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Fri Jul-09-10 11:40 PM

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2. "RE: .delusion."
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...and is spoken from end to end,
three dimensional in the winter wind
and warmed in the bloom, goes the cycle.

that word, like leaves,
is subject to season
and cannot be returned,
only regrown to begin again...

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{Alchemy:A medieval chemical philosophy having as its asserted aims the transmutation of base metals into gold.}

  

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mindful
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Sun Jul-11-10 09:15 AM

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The change in tone here:

left to wonder
how to navigate
the verbiage seen
but never heard,
never to be afforded
understanding and,
therefore, we imagine.

moved me a little bit more than the beginning lines. I thought this was concise (although short) and ended well... Peace~

  

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HueyNewton
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Tue Jul-20-10 02:33 PM

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4. "RE: .delusion."
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i don't do drugs i am drugs
perhaps i'm more eccentric than psychotic
but then i reflect on a theory
think rich look poor
5 percent nation of gods
fish & chips from london
romans 8:28
que pasa mami
smoke one jungle bros
.delusion.

mental intercourse
-xxx

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

  

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