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Decstar
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Mon May-24-10 06:28 PM

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""93 Limbs""


  

          

Whats going on, peoples. I'll drop two today with not real intro. "93 limbs" is just a sensual piece.



This maybe be the perfect metaphor,
but I want to take
my journey in life
through you,
I want all my enlightenments
to tingle through both our limbs
in inseparable connotations,
I want this episode of pleasure
to be a long rhapsody
with a short attention span
of twitches
as I flick through
the changing channels
of your limbs of love
exposed not only for my viewing pleasures,
but in depth analysis
and penetrating research,
I want time to be an elevator
to levels unknown
so if we ever finish,
I will still be travelling through you,
as you are dripping,
I’m slipping,
as you are pulsating,
I am soothing
and as you are cooing,
I am moving in deeper and deeper,
we’ve fantasized about this so many times
that we are now acting out the parts,
this seduction,
inducing the heightening
of our senses,
is more than me just
moaning everything in between
you horizontal and vertical lips,
fulfilling the developments
of eroticism
where you can not
underestimate or deny the sensation,
your center folds
picture perfect emotions
I grow jealous of
in your innocent enjoyment
of my employment
to take care of your rather deployment
of intimacy,
we multiply ourselves
not in likeness,
but in intrications,
in delicate complexities
that makes our opposites
attract one another,
who are we to block these urges in darkness
and not give in to the unthinkable
of the lightheadedness of mind states,
together,
we are a whole lot
of pieces conjuring as one purpose
in a life full of inadequacies
and temptations,
yet no one can lose themselves
in themselves quite like us,
I’ve gone through every inch of you
in 12-round bouts,
but no victory is sweeter
than us toe to toe
with our body parts
made into one body,
one love,
one level of conception,
one coital experience being repeated
one night into the next

"There is nothing more poetic, but depressing than a male writer" -yours truly

  

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RE: "93 Limbs"
May 24th 2010
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RE: "93 Limbs"
May 26th 2010
2
woah
Jun 15th 2010
3
RE: woah
Jun 17th 2010
4

PhotoSynthesis
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Mon May-24-10 07:56 PM

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1. "RE: "93 Limbs""
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So -- didja count em' ... 93 Limbs?!?! --

... and can ya name each of em'?!?!? -- Those 93 Limbs --

What a creatively sensual writer you've become Dec! -- *Fans Self*








A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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Decstar
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Wed May-26-10 12:50 PM

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2. "RE: "93 Limbs""
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lol

i was inspired to write about intercourse, which is why I stuck coital at the end, which is the actually word for the act of having sex. i wanted to write about what connects when having sex and if you count all the separate limbs on your body and times it by two and also the thought process of having sex and love, you get 93 separate parts connecting. i'm not sure if i should bother witht he list or not.

"There is nothing more poetic, but depressing than a male writer" -yours truly

  

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Ezzsential
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Tue Jun-15-10 03:49 PM

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could definately feel the sensuality, whoever u wrote it to must have liked it, and then wanted to get down witchu after lol
nah im playin but i felt this along with slow music and some wine ..peace


FUBU=for us by us, the color codes are made for women by women.. those that MISUSE -D I E-spirit and all!

  

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Decstar
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Thu Jun-17-10 10:00 AM

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ezz, you killing with the profile pic. and thank you for the reply.

"There is nothing more poetic, but depressing than a male writer" -yours truly

  

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