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A Thousantears
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Tue Feb-16-10 06:07 PM

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"music lives where the magic is static..."
Tue Feb-16-10 06:22 PM by A Thousantears

  

          

Filled to the brim with visions to dance to...
hiding behind my left field where light lives lively,
playing in colour-
yet greying and growing duller,
But hovering slightly over the sound in numbers...

Making it rather pleasant indeed as it dips and
recedes and comes in shades to alter my plight,
and lip-sync the need,
Envisaged a step; for my rhythms made the decision that i had to...
I am the insignificance that to your pull is drawn
with benign innocence... unto you I am poured...
I watch your timing by ear and each step is unprepared,
Identifiable in simplicity where you are distinct and I am the listening spared,

You come over the vista of knowing
and laid upon your hands are the oceans and lands,
open to suggestion and giving freely,
administering command,
insisting on having this dance...

where you go you move like lips and you sway like hips,
your sound is lyrical liquid, gifted with the science of art,
In your eyes beauty is the beholder captured and by the same eye taken apart...

_______________________________________
Synesthesia is a poet...
_______________________________________

"We are a thousand tears over...T.I.A:
This Is Africa..."

  

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How Lyrically ReFreshing!!!
Feb 16th 2010
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RE: How Lyrically ReFreshing!!!
Feb 16th 2010
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RE: music lives where the magic is static...
Feb 17th 2010
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RE: music lives where the magic is static...
Feb 18th 2010
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PhotoSynthesis
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Tue Feb-16-10 06:29 PM

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1. "How Lyrically ReFreshing!!!"
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Every line rings like tiny bells ... being hit by gentle drops of rain --


(((WELCOME)))


You write real nice, Missy -- and if that's you in your avatar, you're a pretty girl too! -- *smiles*


Write summm mo' --






A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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A Thousantears
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Tue Feb-16-10 06:34 PM

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2. "RE: How Lyrically ReFreshing!!!"
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Tue Feb-16-10 06:35 PM by A Thousantears

  

          

yea thats me... thank you

_______________________________________
Synesthesia is a poet...
_______________________________________

"We are a thousand tears over...T.I.A:
This Is Africa..."

  

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Funda97till
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Wed Feb-17-10 08:11 AM

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i thought this was dope, but the last line is what REALLY hooked me. tight.

  

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HueyNewton
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Thu Feb-18-10 04:04 PM

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relaxing wordplay, ahhh . . {}

lifE imitates art
-xxx

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

  

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