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PhotoSynthesis
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"A Year Of Love"


          

Another year slips slowly through the cracks

Yet in the blink of an eye

It disappears behind history's humanity

Tis' nothing but vanity

Keeping me from looking

For the beauty in karma's kindred smile

All the while ... hiding my tired eyes from fate

Before it's too late

I screen X-rated fantasies

Like erotic shark bait

Yet, silently I wait

For the coming around of what goes around

Not making a sound ... just hittin' the ground

Running /

Sunning in retribution's rays

365 days of declaration

Fluent in communication … Yet I speak in riddles

Spewing questions and statements

… requiring one to puzzle over ...

To answer or understand … Conundrum

Perplexing /

Vexing electric enigmas thru stigmas

I ain't skurrred of things unseen …

Tho' the future's unpredictable & fate is hella mean

I've got weapons of mass destruction

Deeply embedded within my soul

So I battle rusted armor that rattles

Stealing wisdom like silver & gold

Bold/

I am indeed in need of nothing “but” love

(((Unconditionally)))

This year is gonna give it to me

All 12 months / effective & efficiently

Love from the Universe / Love from above


Does anybody else know .. what I'm speaking of?



So ...

What's your 2010 year lookin' like so far? and what are YOUR expectations for 2010?


( ( ( SPEAK IT INTO EXISTANCE ) ) )






A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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i could've easily read this:
Feb 04th 2010
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I Am ...
Feb 04th 2010
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RE: A Year Of Love
Feb 04th 2010
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RE: A Year Of Love
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I liked this
Feb 07th 2010
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RE: I liked this
Feb 07th 2010
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RE: A Year Of Love
Feb 08th 2010
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RE: A Year Of Love
Feb 10th 2010
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RE: A Year Of Love
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RE: A Year Of Love
Feb 13th 2010
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RE: A Year Of Love
Feb 16th 2010
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RE: A Year Of Love
Feb 20th 2010
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Where's My SuperGLUE ?!?!? ...
Mar 02nd 2010
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      RE: Where's My SuperGLUE ?!?!? ...
Mar 03rd 2010
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RE: A Year Of Love
Mar 06th 2010
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RE: A Year Of Love
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blaksilence
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Thu Feb-04-10 09:29 AM

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1. "i could've easily read this:"
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>Tis' nothing but vanity
>
>Keeping me from looking
>
>For the beauty in karma's kindred smile



in some published author's book.


man.


>What's your 2010 year lookin' like so far? and what are YOUR
>expectations for 2010?
>
>
>( ( ( SPEAK IT INTO EXISTANCE ) ) )



finished my first book ever a few weeks ago.

i'm waiting for it to be available on amazon.com in a few
weeks before i start promoting it.


here's the unofficial link tho:


http://www.lulu.com/product/paperback/midnight-in-the-east-wing/6308776?productTrackingContext=center_search_results


and i'm working on 20 other books, fiction, nonfiction,
shrug, you name it.


people tell me not to be so focused on writing, but for me,
that's like telling Michael Phelps not be to be so focused
on swimming





and weed.



peace, pho.


_____________________________________

The cry I bring down from the hills
__________belongs to a girl still burning
__________inside my head. At daybreak

____________________she burns like a piece of paper. - YK

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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2. "I Am ..."
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Thu Feb-04-10 07:31 PM by PhotoSynthesis

          

... So Proud

...... Of You --


(((Congratulations))) -- and best of luck on "ALL" your future endeavors! -- *Kool-Aid Smile*


Your book looks delicious! --


"Written between 9:00 P.M. January 4, 2010 and 9:00 A.M. January 5, 2010 / / Here lies 36 poems from America's next emerging poet"


U GO BOY! --






A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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gsquared
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Thu Feb-04-10 07:41 PM

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3. "RE: A Year Of Love"
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Years span from left to right, eternal spirals collapse upon themselves and dangle with efficiency...love is the stuff that all flesh is made of...

  

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HueyNewton
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Sat Feb-06-10 02:36 PM

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4. "RE: A Year Of Love"
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conclude chapters of a quarter after
classic material still a vocab choreographer -
I lost myself being politically incorrect
a booK wrote 'I need relapse therapy'
and still I RISE . .

what happened to hip-hop?
-xxx

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

  

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mindful
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5. "I liked this"
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Sun Feb-07-10 10:55 AM by mindful

  

          

for the peacefulness that resonates in almost each line... especially towards the ending, truly beautiful:

Fluent in communication … Yet I speak in riddles

Spewing questions and statements

… requiring one to puzzle over ...

To answer or understand … Conundrum

Perplexing /

Vexing electric enigmas thru stigmas

I ain't skurrred of things unseen …

Tho' the future's unpredictable & fate is hella mean

I've got weapons of mass destruction

Deeply embedded within my soul


*nods* Peace~

now, what am I looking forward to in 2010?

one step closer to being
debt-free, the bills no longer
pile up and I can
breathe without worrying if I
have to pay for the very wind
I take in. my love-life is still
non-existent, yet I'm being
more open to the possibilities of
hope, peace, lust, and passion. I've
grown w/in the past year, my
world is filled with optimism
and assurance. fuck wallowing in
self-pity, that look is obsolete.
I'm thankful I've been able to press
delete, start anew, and drink it all
in...

------------------------------
blog|books|browse|buy
http://itsallrelative.blogetery.com
http://www.formspring.me/mindful
http://www.lulu.com/content/7598631

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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6. "RE: I liked this"
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Granny always told me we can get debt free -- eventually -- (and maybe temporarily) -- but we cain't "STAY" debt free, nahmean? --

Yet, keeping debt at a minimum is a worthwhile goal, no doubt! -- *smiles*

(((Something we all should strive 4 -- Forreal Tho)))



...and if that saying: "Good things come to those who "wait" ... is true -- you definitely have something HELLA GOOD waiting for you -- -- (Love~Wise)

You've been patient in your evolution, msmind -- So may the planets & stars align in 2010 to bring that *Special* someone into your path for a "Love Connection" of sincere & great proportions.


(((Speaking It Into Existence)))


~Love "self" first / All other love will follow~





A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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7. "RE: A Year Of Love"
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presently in the ATL chillin wit my chirren missin that blizzard in the middle east USA this is that year for LOVIN so yeah send some more i;m recievin it

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




www.myspace.com/asiem61

  

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Pit Bull
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Wed Feb-10-10 11:46 PM

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8. "RE: A Year Of Love"
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My life is just sitting in Sac waiting for me to come back, so 2010 has been a grind to survive.

But its you I'm more interested in, Missssss Photo. I've been neglecting you (and the boards) but especially you, because you deserve the most attention (since you GIVE the most attention).

So. Every time I read one of your poem's I'm jealous. You have this incredible gift in that you can write these different poems that will have a familiar rhythm and vibe, I can settle in and let my mind wander through the space you create, and your voice is absolutely unmistakable.

Yet you never seem to repeat yourself- rhymes, themes, concepts, lines. You never get stuck reusing yourself- or if you do, you have so much source material and shit that I don't even notice. I've decided I'm going to start pointing out things others do well that I do poorly as a way to offer better, more heartfelt response than just 'I like yo shit'. And thats the first thing that springs to mind as to what YOU do better, among many others. That is one thing that I'd like to be able to use to work on myself thru reading your words.

Thank you for sharing, Photo.

"What is done in love always takes place beyond good and evil." -- Nietzsche

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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9. "RE: A Year Of Love"
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>My life is just sitting in Sac waiting for me to come back, so 2010 has been a grind to survive.

If your "life" is in Sac ... where exactly are YOU now? -- *Jus' wondering*

... and how long do you think YOU and your life will be separated? -- *chuckles*

Please get back to LIFE ... and don't let it get away again! --

And thanks so much for your kinds words. (You cain't see me, but this lil' chocolate girl is blushing)

I believe your goal to start pointing out things others do well is mos' def' commendable, and will be welcomed by ALL -- (Both here on OKP ... as well as off the Net)

I swear, you're a sweetheart for that! -- *muah*


I LOVE your sig too: "What is done in love always takes place beyond good and evil." -- Nietzsche


Much LOVE 2 U ... and thanks again for your "love" & acknowledgement.





A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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10. "RE: A Year Of Love"
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Salt Lake City. A victim of foolish choices and a bad economy. As to how long the separation will last, well, hopefully short... but I can't see a road home any time soon. Which actually just gave me an idea for a new piece....


Anyway, you know I love everything you write. But I know its still nice to have someone say it... so I'm saying it. Even if all this mushy shit makes me uncomfortable,

(Don't worry, I'll still point out other things you do better than me in the future, uncomfortable or not!)

"What is done in love always takes place beyond good and evil." -- Nietzsche

  

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Otto
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11. "RE: A Year Of Love"
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...what is indescribable cannot be described...

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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12. "RE: A Year Of Love"
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2 things for 2010 -- (These two things been on my list damn year EVERY YEAR ... but I'mmma keep puttin' em' on the list til' I finally accomplish em')


1) Learn Conversational Spanish

I mean ... I know words, phrases, and even complete sentences ... but once a conversation gets going, I revert back to English, cuz I cain't hold a long conversation in Spanish.

I first learned Spanish in New York thru my neighbors and classmates from Puerto Rico, Cuba, and the Dominican Republic.

Then we moved to Texas, and I found that the Spanish I "thought" I knew was different from Mexican Spanish. *Different Dialects* ... and a lotta slang -- (((Tex-Mex)))

In any case, I need to go to classes for Spanish ... cuz I got tapes, VHS, DVD's, CD's etc. out da kazoo -- but I need an INSTRUCTOR, nahmean?


2) Yoga -- I gotta get back on track. I haven't done Yoga in over -7 years. I miss it ... the flexibility & limber~ness I usta have ... and I miss sleeping so soundly.








A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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13. "RE: A Year Of Love"
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Beautiful. Simply beautiful.


"To be a poet is a condition, not a profession."
- Robert Frost

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http://www.lulu.com/content/187759
http://www.hdfest.com/Barry/allreviewsbarry.html
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PhotoSynthesis
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14. "Where's My SuperGLUE ?!?!? ..."
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So I can stick yo feet to the board ... so you can't git away!!!! --


*Miss U*


A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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15. "RE: Where's My SuperGLUE ?!?!? ..."
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Tis' nothing but vanity
>
>Keeping me from looking
>
>For the beauty in karma's kindred smile

These 3 lines here speak to me....photo u r a genius...muah

Deepthought

"When I hear wack rhymes, I get fed up"- Krs-One

"Even when I'm bragging, I'm being sincere"-LL

Verse One:

Could you tell me who released our animal instinct?
Got the white man sittin' there tickled pink.
Laughin' at us on the av

  

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16. "RE: A Year Of Love"
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>I screen X-rated fantasies
>
>Like erotic shark bait
>
>Yet, silently I wait
>
>For the coming around of what goes around
>
>Not making a sound ... just hittin' the ground
>
>Running /
>
>Sunning in retribution's rays
>
>365 days of declaration
>
>Fluent in communication … Yet I speak in riddles
>
>Spewing questions and statements
>
>… requiring one to puzzle over ...
>
>To answer or understand … Conundrum



I especially loved this scene transition right here....I could almsot hear the steps.....

http://www.youtube.com/user/cierno?feature=mhee


Check it out

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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17. "RE: A Year Of Love"
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Nice 2 C U back On board, Phenom!


Thanks 4 the Peep --

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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