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PhotoSynthesis
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"I C U ..."
Wed Apr-08-09 11:08 PM by PhotoSynthesis

          

Note: This is NOT a continuation of EmBri-Yo --


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… I C U
Spinning whirlwind words with vicious verbs that rotate counterclockwise
Painting fatal landscapes in awesome 3D

… I C U
Pouring primal poetry into bountiful bowls mixed with powerful prose
Spraying solstice sentences with Tropic of Capricorn cadence

… I C U
Stringing beautiful sentiments beaded & blessed with brilliance
Slowly flowing over crisp frozen waterfalls
Lustered lyricism shimmers … reflecting waves of laughter as Mother Nature calls

… I C U
Sculpting freestyle figures … molding melodic mayhem with a wicked twist of lime
Sweet & sour chronicles chisel tickled taste buds long before sensing the absence of time

… I C U
Holding explicit electricity with bare hands while scripting lightning lyrics in grandstands
Visions of collisions clash with titans writin' rigorously … flowing vigorously

… I C U
Sewing sovereign sentences with silver & gold threads … twisted word dreds
Hanging from haiku heads bent in prayer to profess …. love & happiness
Only those prepared for change will rearrange their minds to receive … and not grieve

… I C U
In 2009 ascending to climb over past mistakes ... swimming in lakes of literary liberation
Speaking karma into existence at fate's foretold insistence

… I C U
Spawning yet another year … subtracting fear from fractioned factors
Once more the spore of wordplay populates OKP freestyle with lyrically theatrical actors


It's just good to see folks ... Old Heads & New ... coming out of hibernation ... and flowing.


ITS SPRINGTIME! --



A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
RE: I C U ...
Apr 08th 2009
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RE: I C U ...
Apr 09th 2009
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RE: I C U ...
Apr 09th 2009
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RE: stay up
Apr 09th 2009
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there she go
Apr 09th 2009
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There He Go Again ...
Apr 15th 2009
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i digs
Apr 09th 2009
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Thank U So Much ...
Apr 10th 2009
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RE: I C U ...
Apr 12th 2009
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RE: I C U ...
Apr 12th 2009
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Niiiiice.....
Apr 13th 2009
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RE: I C U ...
Apr 14th 2009
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RE: I C U ...
Apr 15th 2009
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I see you
Apr 16th 2009
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RE: I C U ...
Apr 18th 2009
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RE: I C U ...
Apr 24th 2009
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RE: I C U ...
Apr 25th 2009
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      You Guys Rock!!!
Apr 25th 2009
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RE: I C U ...
Apr 25th 2009
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RE: I C U ...
Apr 26th 2009
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I "Might" Have To Use That Innna Flow ...
May 04th 2009
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RE: I C U ...
Apr 28th 2009
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RE: I C U ...
Apr 28th 2009
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      RE: I C U ...
Apr 29th 2009
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           I Have A Suggestion ...
Apr 29th 2009
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RE: I C U ...
May 05th 2009
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Nowachaoticthing
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1. "RE: I C U ..."
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Your words always bring a smile to my face. Always.


"To be a poet is a condition, not a profession."
- Robert Frost

http://inevitabletruth.blogspot.com/

Blind Eye Turning: My book
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My Sports Blog http://wishbonec.wordpress.com/


  

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gsquared
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Thu Apr-09-09 02:13 AM

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2. "RE: I C U ..."
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The buoyant Photo-ness we've come to expect for what is becoming, damn, quite a few years..lol..


"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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wisdom31
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Thu Apr-09-09 04:20 PM

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3. "RE: I C U ..."
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Great poetry...I love the flow and content!!!!


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"A woman's life is love, a man's love is life..."
-----Phonte




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freedomfighter
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Thu Apr-09-09 05:33 PM

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4. "RE: stay up"
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E.R.
I need an IV HEHEHEEE
excellent as usual

  

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Lincoln Hawk
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Thu Apr-09-09 06:45 PM

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5. "there she go"
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talkin about ol Lincoln again...i do appreciate it my lady...you are a pure writer with a deep soul...i can dig it...peace

"dude, the only thing i fear is your hair cut.. what is that a mop glued to your head? come on man... style up."-Bartek

all across ya forhead and cheek bones...i break facials and reconstruct beauty to ugly...im an artist mang...Lincoln Picasso Van Gogh

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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12. "There He Go Again ..."
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Telling my secrets! --

You know I be a fan of your wordage boy! -- Just hush ^Up^ -- *smiles*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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blak_yukon
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Thu Apr-09-09 08:48 PM

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6. "i digs"
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yeah-it must be a seasonal thing...





me and the fellas would converge and heat up some Hot Pockets in preparation for Rap City.© Roc

dude, getting a response from the folks at freestyle is like watching water boil...© Tek

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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7. "Thank U So Much ..."
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Fri Apr-10-09 06:02 PM by PhotoSynthesis

          

Those of you who've read and felt my flow -- Cuz ^this^ is for you all --based on what I've read over the past few years -- (past & present)... and hopefully "future" --

You've been "my" inspiration -- (some of you ... for years) -- Both with Writtens & Audios -- and I hope to continue reading YOUR ish as time goes on ...


~Happy Easter~

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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phelonious
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Sun Apr-12-09 10:29 AM

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8. "RE: I C U ..."
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Hmmm....this is quite a mix....I had to read over again to catch up to speed....

http://www.youtube.com/user/cierno?feature=mhee


Check it out

  

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9. "RE: I C U ..."
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"PHOTO in the building" - (in toughest flashy rapper voice)

nah i like this...daps


"...they say rappers are stripping males, outta work jerks since they shutdown chip and dales" - MF DOOM


"its a miracle how he gets so lyrical, and proceeds to move the crowd like a old negro spiritual" - MF DOOM

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KnowOne
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10. "Niiiiice....."
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so good to be reading from you again!

_________________________________________
"Too weird to live.... too rare to die..."

IG: KnowOne215 | PS+ ID: KnowOne215

  

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HueyNewton
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Tue Apr-14-09 03:53 PM

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it's like liberating karma from beyond, i say YES!!

I am an oxymoron
-xxx

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

  

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deepthought74
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13. "RE: I C U ..."
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SOMETHINGS NEVER CHANGE...SKILLS AT THEIR BEST!!

Deepthought

"When I hear wack rhymes, I get fed up"- Krs-One

"Even when I'm bragging, I'm being sincere"-LL

Verse One:

Could you tell me who released our animal instinct?
Got the white man sittin' there tickled pink.
Laughin' at us on the av

  

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MarVeL
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14. "I see you"
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penning positive poetry for the players.


This was sick. Alot of great alliteration and I found it to be quite motivational. Thanks for posting this.




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this is an INTENSIVE CARE UNIT for so many it seems u have again nailed it in the title alone while at the same time recognizing the talent words can;t adequatley express....thanks for seeing so vividly

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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Laz aka Black Native
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Your words were vivid, its as if I could see these actions taking place as I read them. Words taking the physical characteristics of your metaphors was all I could imagine after every line.

Furious Styles: https://blacknative.bandcamp.com/album/furious-styles

Black Confederate on iTunes:
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Video to Black Confederate: http://youtu.be/jbpAQ4qzkqY

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Sha Knowledge
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Yo this is dope as hell I actually read it a 2nd time and I'm lovin the lyricism and the poetic feel to it! keep doin what you do!

www.reverbnation.com/shachandler

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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18. "You Guys Rock!!!"
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( ( ( ALL OF YOU ) ) )

... and thank you so much for the acknowledgement & love.


*Much Appreciated*


A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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Pit Bull
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You have the ability to write in a way (and about a scope of topics I can just sit here and be jealous of; seriously, sometimes you make me feel like I got a one track mind) that makes me feel like you're talking about me. And then I reread your piece and get something completely different out of it. I love it!

"What is done in love always takes place beyond good and evil." -- Nietzsche

  

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Purple
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That was hella fresh photo every line I found flowed off my tongue as if I where spitting it from my very own pool of saliva!

Purple is universal with word flow!

  

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25. "I "Might" Have To Use That Innna Flow ..."
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>spittin' it from my very own pool of saliva! --

... but don't worry ... I'll give YOU credit for it -- *smiles*


Thanx Purp!





A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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i suddenly got tha urge to know where Mystic Elixer and Del is at.

this was exceptional

really felt tha love and joy in this.

kinda makes me feel like doin anotha board piece

"There is nothing more poetic, but depressing than a male writer" -yours truly

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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>i suddenly got tha urge to know where Mystic Elixer and Del is at.

( I been sending out vibes to ^them^ -- now that you mention it ... )

>this was exceptional / really felt tha love and joy in this.

(Thank You Kind Sir)

>kinda makes me feel like doin anotha board piece

(I wish you would -- (DO IT!) --









A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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but how would i do it this time. i think i've done it to death.

i guess i can do all names again

"There is nothing more poetic, but depressing than a male writer" -yours truly

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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24. "I Have A Suggestion ..."
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Instead of doing the "name game" ... why don't you do a dedication to the ladies ... (Maybe Mothers since it's fixxin' to be Mother's Day soon) --

Or ... maybe even flow something that "alludes" to people on the board and their flow~styles ... *WITHOUT* actually putting their names on it ... nahmean?

Like ...

When I read YOUR flows, it's like your brain is leaking ... so I see your thoughts dripping with intensity and much contemplation.

In other words, you're a "Thinker" ... so you mull over things and ... possibly / probably ... think about them too much / to the point of worrying --

That's not a bad thing, by the way ... but it means you care ... and you want to examine every option before making decisions.

(bear in mind, the only reason I know this is cuz I've known you for awhile -- )

But in any case, I'm sure whatever you flip on board will be nice ... and it ain't gotta be what I suggested either!


Like the NIKE commercial sez: Just Do It!




A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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wonluv
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ack ha....nice

~sicknature~ My financial skills/discipline need Jesus. -J-Skivvy

****We need more Pharoahe Monch!!!****

  

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