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gsquared
Member since Oct 26th 2002
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Sun Feb-08-09 09:23 PM

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"Simple Reflection"


          

Simple reflection
my best protection
sprinklers spit in the rain
leftover section
a stenciled correction
green and yellow and stained

Just short of a fog
a guy pats a dog
catches the eye of a stranger
simple it is
and simple it was,
connective, a soulful arranger

Trapped on a whack track
I can get my body back
stacked deck contract
third world push back
black on a white spool
wound around a new fool
lacking felt like a china bull
sittin' not pretty on a broken rule

Lifting the sister
with the upper two
feeding the twister
the strangest brews
lefting the rightness
half past the light
loosen the tightness
with a spill to the night

An ancient reminder
a droop clock unwinder
conning the thief on the corner
pants pockets cut
to betray the corrupt
the seeker is getting much warmer

We're in it together
let go of the tether
measure the length of the bind
simple reflection
my best protection
discovering I'm my kind

  

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RE: Simple Reflection
Feb 09th 2009
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Mar 25th 2009
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HueyNewton
Member since Feb 27th 2005
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Mon Feb-09-09 06:21 PM

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1. "RE: Simple Reflection"
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I got the interplay of metaphors on it, nice one . . think i'll have
some brandy after this piece ((*))

still struggle like the art form
-xxx

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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Wed Mar-25-09 04:34 PM

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Reflecting a bouncing light ...


Look atchu ... tryna spit summmm lyric shyt! -- *chuckles*



*Bounce ^UP^*


A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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