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theScholar3000
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Thu Aug-28-08 02:43 AM

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"BITCH...a beautiful love poem"


  

          

I met you by chance when I was vulnerable.

My heart was in many pieces and you carefully
And unknowingly picked up each one from the
Ground and glued it back together again.

I smile to myself wondering; how will I fuck this one up?

This may seem odd to you, I know it is to me
But I’ve been known to be untrustworthy when it
Comes to love and my lover, I don’t lie.

However I am too nice.

My flirtatious ways make it so that I am never alone
My bed knows not what it is to be cold.

My fatal flaw is that I think I’m flawless.

This is my attempt

At examining my soul so that I may be made whole again
Because I met the girl of my dreams before you and
I blew it.

I committed too swiftly to love, when it was merely my own
Lust or infatuation or my wantonness.

All I really want in this... life is to have a ride or die bitch
To call my wife.

See there I go again, does the word bitch
Offend you?


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Things may come to those who wait...
but only the things left by those who hustle

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
well, does it offend you?
Aug 28th 2008
1
RE: well, does it offend you?
Aug 28th 2008
2
      :0)
Aug 30th 2008
5
RE: BITCH...a beautiful love poem
Aug 29th 2008
3
thank you
Aug 30th 2008
6
Nice Drop.
Aug 29th 2008
4
nice piece.
Aug 31st 2008
7
RE: BITCH...a beautiful love poem
Sep 02nd 2008
8
"I smile to myself wondering; how will I fuck this one up?"
Sep 02nd 2008
9
i like the combination
Sep 07th 2008
10
thanks
Sep 18th 2008
11
RE: BITCH...a beautiful love poem
Sep 19th 2008
12
God this was awesome bruh. Keep on emptying out. I love this one.
Sep 20th 2008
13
yo, how come I've yet to see you at the panoramic poetry?
Sep 20th 2008
14
lol, i know i'm mad late w/ this response
Nov 22nd 2008
15
RE: BITCH...a beautiful love poem
Nov 24th 2008
16
your nice wid it :)
Nov 24th 2008
17

theScholar3000
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Thu Aug-28-08 07:22 PM

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1. "well, does it offend you?"
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MY SHOW:http://www.gtownradio.com/ Wed 8-10pm
MY MUSIC:www.myspace.com/EL3G
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Things may come to those who wait...
but only the things left by those who hustle

  

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the_best_part
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Thu Aug-28-08 08:18 PM

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2. "RE: well, does it offend you?"
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i see you

  

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theScholar3000
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5. ":0)"
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Things may come to those who wait...
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Amai_1
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Fri Aug-29-08 04:43 PM

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3. "RE: BITCH...a beautiful love poem"
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no.......

I like this

  

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theScholar3000
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6. "thank you"
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KnowOne
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Fri Aug-29-08 09:58 PM

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4. "Nice Drop."
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n/m

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"Too weird to live.... too rare to die..."

IG: KnowOne215 | PS+ ID: KnowOne215

  

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7. "nice piece."
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theInvisible_man
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KY-ddVDk2do&NR=1

  

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HueyNewton
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Tue Sep-02-08 04:57 PM

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8. "RE: BITCH...a beautiful love poem"
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shit happens, yeah it does . . props!!!!!!

I am an oxymoron
-xxx

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

  

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Pit Bull
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Tue Sep-02-08 09:29 PM

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9. ""I smile to myself wondering; how will I fuck this one up?""
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word

"What is done in love always takes place beyond good and evil." -- Nietzsche

  

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Ezzsential
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10. "i like the combination"
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of---

hood-ness and poetry..

good read

  

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theScholar3000
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Thu Sep-18-08 08:28 PM

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11. "thanks"
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Decstar
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Fri Sep-19-08 11:39 AM

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12. "RE: BITCH...a beautiful love poem"
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Fri Sep-19-08 11:43 AM by Decstar

  

          

i feels, fam

i think, like soooo many other words that the "ebonics" dictionary has tarnish, that women get the wrong idea about the B word. and i said the B word just outta respect, but really, is it not just the definiton of a woman who will do anything for whoever they love whether by force or understandin to accomplish the sincere appreciation of a bond that no matter what, no sadness should harm who she love and no boundaries should be crossed in efforts to distort who she is and what she stands for.

that may be a long or wrong definiton, but does it not render a true meaning or should we just go by a female dog, who in truth, will do the same thing, right.....

BS aside, men confuse the word anyway while most women disguise it as a PMS alter ego, which is the way it's bein use today anyway.


sorry about the babbling, it was a very good read

"There is nothing more poetic, but depressing than a male writer" -yours truly

  

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Ms Pele
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Sat Sep-20-08 04:53 PM

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13. "God this was awesome bruh. Keep on emptying out. I love this one."
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>I met you by chance when I was vulnerable.
>
>My heart was in many pieces and you carefully
>And unknowingly picked up each one from the
>Ground and glued it back together again.
>
>I smile to myself wondering; how will I fuck this one up?
>
>This may seem odd to you, I know it is to me
>But I’ve been known to be untrustworthy when it
>Comes to love and my lover, I don’t lie.
>
>However I am too nice.
>
>My flirtatious ways make it so that I am never alone
>My bed knows not what it is to be cold.
>
>My fatal flaw is that I think I’m flawless.
>
>This is my attempt
>
>At examining my soul so that I may be made whole again
>Because I met the girl of my dreams before you and
>I blew it.
>
>I committed too swiftly to love, when it was merely my own
>Lust or infatuation or my wantonness.
>
>All I really want in this... life is to have a ride or die
>bitch
>To call my wife.
>
>See there I go again, does the word bitch
>Offend you?
>
>
>>MY SHOW:http://www.gtownradio.com/ Wed 8-10pm
>MY MUSIC:www.myspace.com/EL3G
>http://gtownradio.com/images/stories/Taragirl_smbanner1.gif
>Things may come to those who wait...
>but only the things left by those who hustle

  

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EmceeGrayMatter
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Sat Sep-20-08 09:33 PM

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14. "yo, how come I've yet to see you at the panoramic poetry?"
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Sat Sep-20-08 09:33 PM by EmceeGrayMatter

  

          

what's the deal?

  

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theScholar3000
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Sat Nov-22-08 03:07 AM

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15. "lol, i know i'm mad late w/ this response"
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usually something else has been going on when they have it
or i was out of the city. Crucial asked me the same thing, lol.
i missed it last week, hopefully i'll see you there next time.

peace

  

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Mon Nov-24-08 04:07 PM

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16. "RE: BITCH...a beautiful love poem"
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this was dope..
i love how open you were in this piece
felt like i was spying on a private conversation

  

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Universadevine
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Mon Nov-24-08 08:41 PM

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17. "your nice wid it :)"
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great piece ..

I don't wanna ill ..I jus wanna chill

  

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