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soulsugar
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Mon Jun-16-08 06:40 AM

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" PINKSUGAR"


          

.....and my lips kissing your stimulating pain until you whispered "stop"



theres no sweethurt no goodpain no stabbinglove no wonderingknow no touchlesshit
no otherlove no dumbgenius no dryrain
no the sweetlesskiss


you're the sugar to my fist
may I pound you're forever
test calling what is left
worthy or less-pinksugar too rest...

  

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RE: PINKSUGAR
Jun 16th 2008
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MMmmmmmmmm ...
Jun 16th 2008
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RE: MMmmmmmmmm ...
Jun 17th 2008
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      RE: MMmmmmmmmm ...
Jun 21st 2008
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okay you got me with this...
Jun 29th 2008
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nappiness
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Mon Jun-16-08 03:07 PM

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1. "RE: PINKSUGAR"
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>theres no sweethurt no goodpain no stabbinglove no
>wonderingknow no touchlesshit
>no otherlove no dumbgenius no dryrain
>no the sweetlesskiss

the continuation of words, no spaces serves as a great visual effect to accompany the antonyms, which are truly two parts of the one whole.

very nice read.

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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Mon Jun-16-08 06:55 PM

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2. "MMmmmmmmmm ..."
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^This^ took me somewhere -- Ion't know where it left me at ... But it took me to the other side of "sultry seduction" with a lil' dab of masochism --


*Smack upside da head good*


A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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soulsugar
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Tue Jun-17-08 04:07 PM

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3. "RE: MMmmmmmmmm ..."
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loll I decided to "stop" the movie skit I was to make of this.......

ty Photo & nappiness

  

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ASIEM
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Sat Jun-21-08 11:12 AM

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4. "RE: MMmmmmmmmm ..."
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yeh skit u may say but this has exoerience written all in it...the visual effect accmpanied by blended wordplay makes nice this piece so may pinksugar never become bitter to your taste that we may continue to along the journey with u in here

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




www.myspace.com/asiem61

  

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southqueens
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Sun Jun-29-08 04:38 PM

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5. "okay you got me with this..."
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you're the sugar to my fist
may I pound you're forever

CLLLLLLLASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSIC!!!!!!!!!!!!

the new sig-

"When you know that the life and spirit of others depend on your life and spirit, you have no right to be afraid - even when you are terribly afraid."

-Sembene Ousmane

  

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