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AfternoonDelight
Member since Mar 27th 2008
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Mon Apr-28-08 04:01 PM

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"Love Again"


          

Oh Hi, you're back I see.
What time is it?
Ah, yes the calendar reads Spring.
What have you brought me this time?
Walks in the park, endless sunsets or are you just passing through to play?
Yes, I agree we do get intense at times
you can be very harsh but
we were younger then.
I see your face, you've matured.
One would think you'd grow weary
the way you come and go.
Each time you return
you bring me hope of everlasting love
So, what have you for me this time?

  

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ak_reborn
Member since Sep 24th 2005
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Mon Apr-28-08 05:28 PM

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From the first line to the last, you had me convinced this was something real, looking forward to more work by you

  

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AfternoonDelight
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Tue Apr-29-08 04:54 PM

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Thank You-I do have more ink to share.

  

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Free2Fly
Member since Jan 25th 2008
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Tue Apr-29-08 08:20 AM

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>So, what have you for me this time?

You never know, right!?! lol

This was short and sweet, nice read. Look forward to more from you.

Peace & Blessings

_______________________

Lesson Learned...

  

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AfternoonDelight
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Tue Apr-29-08 04:56 PM

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Thank You-Hoping many will like the additional ink I share.

  

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deep_thawtz
Member since Jan 15th 2008
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Tue Apr-29-08 06:46 PM

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I thought you were talkin to me!! lol....LOVED THIS DROP FA REAL!

California's Catalyst,
Saginaw's Superhero,
Deep Thawtz

  

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Jahlovall3305
Member since Sep 25th 2007
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Thu May-08-08 03:48 PM

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Nice Read. I've kinda been there.... Funny, how time just pass on by.





I expect to pass through life but once. if, therefore, there be any kindness I can show, or any good thing I can do to any fellow being, let me do it now, for I shall not pass this way again.
William Penn 1644-1718
JAHLOVALL

  

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UrFavLurker
Member since May 09th 2008
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Fri May-09-08 12:49 PM

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i really like this...felt like i was reading about myself...pls continue to share

Post death in 5,4,3...



**I might lurk but I don't stalk**

  

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ASIEM
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Sat May-10-08 08:06 AM

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really nice poem simply deep

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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Last_Griot
Member since Mar 21st 2008
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Sat May-10-08 11:59 PM

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Classy very classy indeed.

Bismillah-i-Rah-man-ir-raheem
Alhamdu-Lillahi Rabbil-Aalameen
Ar-Rahman-ir Rahim, Maliki yaum-id-deen, Iyyakt na-budu wa iyyaka nas-taeen; Hdinas-sirat-al-mustaqueema sirat-alla-zeena An'Amta 'Alaihim Ghairil Magdoobi 'Alai-Him Wal-Lad-Dalleen
Ameen

Stay

  

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rap_4_real
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Tue May-13-08 04:11 PM

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I Like It, Very nice.
Peace

  

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