I wanted so much to tell you how much I've missed you in your arms I wanted to say how sorry I was for leaving in your arms I wanted to tell you how I hated you because I couldn't rid myself of these feelings in your arms I wanted to say I love you in your arms couldn't find the words couldn't find the courage but here I lay again in your arms
1. "i've noticed that you're quite big on refrains" In response to Reply # 0
being used in short stanzas...
i've read this, and the fact that the work is so short, the refain is truly not needed. i mean, for me, it disturbs the flow. i thought that using it after the first two lines and then again at the ending would have been appropriate. the poem itself though? passionate, emotional, honest, and sensual. it sort of has this bittersweet tone to it, which i can truly appreciate.
the ending though is what i liked most: couldn't find the words couldn't find the courage but here I lay again in your arms