Its been a minute since we last spoke, a long minute since I felt the heaving Feeling of my heart jumping from my chest to my throat.
Thought I was close, To getting over this Ridiculous grace note And figured you were close too Judging from how hard you've Been pushing me away since the day I woke up and decided to leave you.
But then may 16th came, and through a foggy haze of laughter my phone rang, projecting your name.
I hesitated, wondering if I should avoid you. Yet despite my bad feelings, I answered, Cause I still have the innate itching to spoil you.
I could sense by your tone, That you were feeling more than alone. Questioning my whereabouts and mood, I played it cool Knowing your tricks, I kept my answers short to decrease the chance of any rude comments.
for, I'm still bleeding still healing still searching still grieving still growing
1. "RE: away from you...." In response to Reply # 0
feelin this so close good feelin to write to
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
4. "oh how i know the feeling" In response to Reply # 0
(and i'm quite sure others do as well) all too well... best|most potent lines to me:
Yet despite my bad feelings, I answered, Cause I still have the innate itching to spoil you.
I could sense by your tone, That you were feeling more than alone. Questioning my whereabouts and mood, I played it cool Knowing your tricks, I kept my answers short to decrease the chance of any rude comments.
for, I'm still bleeding still healing still searching still grieving still growing
away from you.
the ending is a very solid one. not one I expected. concise and tight, yet gives the reader a bit of insight. digable *nods*
8. "RE: away from you...." In response to Reply # 0
so, i'm definitely living this right now.
**snaps** way to capture the emotion of the situation. i can really relate to where you are coming from and the imagery of the phone conversation is crystal clear.