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ms mimi diva
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Wed Jun-06-07 01:53 PM by ms mimi diva

  

          

Monday’s oranges were not so good
Sunday there were lively lemons
That danced with like beads of water
On a hot pan
Saturday the mangoes rocked
Back and forth on on the roof of my mouth
Playing a mélange melody

But Monday’s oranges were not so good.

Friday there were cherries so tight and black
That I could clearly see myself.
Thursday there were sepia pears
That tickled the tongue, each bite
A delicious question, each question
A delicious bite.


But Monday’s oranges pallid and round, were not so good.
Wednesday there was a yellow slick of
A banana, a smooth mat to my waterslide hopes
Careening into the marsh of Tuesday’s peach dreams

But Monday’s oranges were not so good.

The dingy blue calico of the creeping suspicion
Smothered my breath
Monday’s oranges were bruised and scarred
And full of dents
And holes where a worm or two had found a home
Yes, these were bad oranges indeed.

Caught in the mire of Monday
I forgot the tenderness of Tuesday, the wonder of Wednesday
The Tenacity of Thursday, The Freedom of Friday, The Scent of Saturday and the Salvation of Sunday
I only saw Monday.

Then suddenly I looked for my basket
Filled with the fruit that I longed for
And found that in my
Momentary
Search for Monday’s oranges
I had forgotten
The bounty
Of the week

http://worthwatering.blogspot.com
Can it be I stayed away too long?/
Did I leave your mind when I was gone?/
It's not my thing trying to get back/
But this time let me tell you where I'm at-- Jackson Five

  

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*smiles*
Jun 07th 2007
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RE: *smiles*
Jun 11th 2007
2
i was feeling those lines very much as well....
Jun 13th 2007
5
Vitamin "C" Enriched --
Jun 11th 2007
3
Jun 12th 2007
4

mindful
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Thu Jun-07-07 05:03 PM

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1. "*smiles*"
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I've been waiting... on you to post something...

Caught in the mire of Monday
I forgot the tenderness of Tuesday, the wonder of Wednesday
The Tenacity of Thursday, The Freedom of Friday, The Scent of Saturday and the Salvation of Sunday
I only saw Monday.

Then suddenly I looked for my basket
Filled with the fruit that I longed for
And found that in my
Momentary
Search for Monday’s oranges
I had forgotten
The bounty
Of the week

glad you finally did. Peace~

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http://msmind.wordpress.com
http://www.clutchmagazine.com

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ms mimi diva
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Mon Jun-11-07 01:10 PM

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2. "RE: *smiles*"
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It has been an interesting period for me in terms of my writing, but I will be posting again.

http://worthwatering.blogspot.com
Can it be I stayed away too long?/
Did I leave your mind when I was gone?/
It's not my thing trying to get back/
But this time let me tell you where I'm at-- Jackson Five

  

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BarTek
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Wed Jun-13-07 12:03 PM

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5. "i was feeling those lines very much as well...."
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nicely done...

@}-,-`-

He looks determined without being ruthless
Something heroic in this man, there's a courage about him
Doesn't look like a killer
Comes across so calm, acts like he has a dream
Full of passion
~

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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Mon Jun-11-07 10:01 PM

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3. "Vitamin "C" Enriched --"
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*Tasty* --

I'm a fruit fanatic, so I loved the irony in this delicious poetic platter.


*Nice~Ness*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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BannedWidth
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Tue Jun-12-07 09:26 PM

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4. ""
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Tue Jun-12-07 09:27 PM by BannedWidth

          

so.....i have read this about 5 times already. I absolutely love it! the message especially!...it helps put everything into perspective. good stuff.

  

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