Put a Man on the earth
make him black
depreciating his worth
add the fact
attacked by political racism since birth
plus school systems don't work
hurt by thugs, sex, and drugs
feed students answers
sweep the failure under rugs
multiplied by a culture
that glamorized the club
getting high , riding dubs
specially if they spin
spend more doe then whats coming in
add him working at ten
for half the wage of men
the comon denominator
they all broke at the end
addition of friends want to hustle
but he knew the definitons of trap
same shit different struggle
made a name in the huddle
shuttle him to state
found college just another hustle
muscle wont let him fail
losing in the books
but on the field he excell
exhale in the draft
family figured he did the Math
moving on up
to a mansion with a staff
but plus his boys and toys
trying to save the hood like shaft
getting high and stunting
looking for late night laughs
haves saw the have nots
trying to subtract what he got
released a couple shots
divided from the fame, masion and yatch
now he doing the remainder
with three hots and a cot

R.I.P. Martin alexander (Marty Gra) Alston - my brother, my mentor , my friend-

check out his Tryin to shake writer's block post. Plus i was riding around with this thought in my head about a story called tragedy of sums. Where events and things in a person's life add up to one tragic outcome.
It's a little rough around the edges.
Probably will have to edit make it flow smooth.
Or i might just scrap it and start over with a whole new story.

R.I.P. Martin alexander (Marty Gra) Alston - my brother, my mentor , my friend-

yo glad to be apart of that cuz it was hot ass hell homie....mos def keep writing.

peace


"my third eye like pink eye...seen and contagious" - Common Sense

http://www.soundclick.com/artist/5/youngsleep_music.htm

http://www.myspace.com/jussleepmusic

if it weren't for this board i don't think i'd write much. it's something about seeing a person do their thing and sparking that creativity within yourself.

R.I.P. Martin alexander (Marty Gra) Alston - my brother, my mentor , my friend-

>Put a Man on the earth
>make him black
>depreciating his worth
>add the fact
>attacked by political racism since birth
>plus school systems don't work
>hurt by thugs, sex, and drugs
>feed students answers
>sweep the failure under rugs
>multiplied by a culture
>that glamorized the club
>getting high , riding dubs
>specially if they spin
>spend more doe then whats coming in
>add him working at ten
>for half the wage of men
>the comon denominator
>they all broke at the end
>addition of friends want to hustle
>but he knew the definitons of trap
>same shit different struggle
>made a name in the huddle
>shuttle him to state
>found college just another hustle
>muscle wont let him fail
>losing in the books
>but on the field he excell
>exhale in the draft
>family figured he did the Math
>moving on up
>to a mansion with a staff
>but plus his boys and toys
>trying to save the hood like shaft
>getting high and stunting
>looking for late night laughs
>haves saw the have nots
>trying to subtract what he got
>released a couple shots
>divided from the fame, masion and yatch
>now he doing the remainder
>with three hots and a cot


You have really came wit it the last few posts I've seen man. Good stuff and please keep it comin

it's the competitor in me hard to admit anyway got to give respect where it's due.

R.I.P. Martin alexander (Marty Gra) Alston - my brother, my mentor , my friend-

>Or i might just scrap it and start over with a whole new story

This was tight Raj -- *Excuse the Delayed Response* -- ~My Bad~

Edit if you must, but no scrappin' -- ^This^ is a *keeper* -- *Yuuuup*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

thanks for the read

i just think i can do more with it. It's reminding me of my: Art of Leaving, joint.

R.I.P. Martin alexander (Marty Gra) Alston - my brother, my mentor , my friend-