heavy eyes rise
and set
over the horizons
of these blocks
i walk

stepping furtively
for the tree roots
have pushed up
sidewalk cement
in a hazardous fashion

my roots have pushed up
a fire that stars and stripes
cannot detain train or change

but my words
have
been
blocked
as of late

early verses
hover eerily
jeering me
and i walk these long blocks

with furtive steps

and heavy breaths

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nice parallel imagery.
feelin it

a g

cuts for luck and scars for freedom

my roots have pushed up
a fire that stars and stripes
cannot detain train or change

but my words
have
been
blocked
as of late

early verses
hover eerily
jeering me
and i walk these long blocks

with furtive steps

and heavy breaths

i'm glad you're posting more. the imagery here is vivid, so detailed, i could see you walking, pacing yourself, and feel the heavy breathing.

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there is no greater life than
the one you build for yourself.

this title has been visited by so many yet this piece remains fresh

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

What ^he^ said! --


*Fresh~Ness*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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Dope drop man. Please keep doin ya thing