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Aeon
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Tue Mar-27-07 01:41 AM

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"minority report #2 (inspired by blaksilence & jay-z)"


  

          

for phila:

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december thirty first, we embarked on another one,
anticipate another nigga dyin from another gun,
the city layin claim stealin souls on its streets
the horror be the fact that its brothers tryna eat
sequestered in a hell, relocated to the hood,

whats good?

more murder, but nobody understood

legislated racism got em starvin like animals,
the hunger boil over making everybody cannibals
you turnin on the channel news/ fox 29

-thats fine,

but the problem is that everybodys lyin
mouth piece for agendas, stories
sold
but the truth aint really told
somebody push the media, influence what we know, atmosphere
of fear
got
every nigga scared, and the hood become a mashup of a million nightmares

trigger happy on the corner,
he hustle for a dollar
cause baby need pampers and blue collar didnt holler..
and his mama at the window,

concessions in her lap,

her son? he keep the lights on, but he live by the gat-and the poison-and the pain/
of a cultural decline
his microeconomics keep the money on his mind
financial situation keep his millimeter-9
tucked by the waistline,
posted up like baseline
movin out the base-
fine
chopped, bagged up and served
cross town beef got him pins & needle-nerved


kinda hard to swallow but at least he aint at war


in synopsis

this is my minority report

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shakin your block with a 6 million dollar bop

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www.davidevanmcdowell.com

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
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Mar 27th 2007
1
you two
Mar 27th 2007
2
yupper.
Mar 27th 2007
3
Yeah
Mar 27th 2007
4
RE: minority report #2 (inspired by blaksilence & jay-z)
Mar 27th 2007
5
this is that shit.
Apr 01st 2007
6
.
Jan 11th 2008
7
Daaaaaaaamn......
Jan 11th 2008
8

blaksilence
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Tue Mar-27-07 06:01 PM

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1. "."
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>legislated racism got em starvin like animals,
>the hunger boil over making everybody cannibals
>you turnin on the channel news/ fox 29
>
>-thats fine,
>
>but the problem is that everybodys lyin



>trigger happy on the corner,
>he hustle for a dollar
>cause baby need pampers and blue collar didnt holler..



>his microeconomics keep the money on his mind
>financial situation keep his millimeter-9
>tucked by the waistline,
>posted up like baseline
>movin out the base-
>fine



^^^^^^^^^

  

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mindful
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Tue Mar-27-07 08:34 PM

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2. "you two"
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i'm convinced are...

brothers from another mother, or some shit...

this was powerful. flow = flawless, language = stellar. i'm interested in seeing how this would sound over one of your beats. care to dive into that? or, was|is this just one of your pieces you'll have tucked away neatly somewhere for safekeeping?

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I wanted to read it. ŠToni Morrison

  

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noseitall
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Tue Mar-27-07 09:16 PM

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3. "yupper."
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nice wordplay.... great mssg.





peace.
~~~~~~~~~

my hard head makes me learn shit the hard way - t.i.

my greatest enemy is my inner me - lupe fiasco

  

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SONO DEF
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Tue Mar-27-07 09:26 PM

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Real nice message, nice wordplay, dope all around, good one

SONO MEANS I AM, ARE YOU?...

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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Tue Mar-27-07 11:55 PM

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5. "RE: minority report #2 (inspired by blaksilence & jay-z)"
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I know you got that big "OK" by yo name now, but you really need to stick around Freestyle and hang wit us for awhile! --

*Need More Reports*


There's a few of you guys -- (like you & blaksilence) -- who could really & positively "teach" the youngin's a thing or two -- *Reach ONE/Teach ONE*

And I'd be right at your feet -- with journal in hand -- takin' notes -- *smiles*


Word ^UP^



A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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gmfb
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6. "this is that shit."
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automatic systematic.

  

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Aeon
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7. "."
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shakin your block with a 6 million dollar bop

_

www.davidevanmcdowell.com

  

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KnowOne
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Fri Jan-11-08 02:12 PM

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8. "Daaaaaaaamn......"
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how did I miss this. Sick drop yo.....
and sadly too fitting.

Keep Flowin'.....

_________________________________________
"Too weird to live.... too rare to die..."

IG: KnowOne215 | PS+ ID: KnowOne215

  

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