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PhotoSynthesis
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"I Wish U ... P*E*A*C*E ..."


          

Peaceful …
… Tranquil …
… Thoughtful …
… Thankful …
Examine fluid feelings as oceans of emotions
Wash lyrically lubricant lotions all over you
~~Gently~~
Bathing your shattered spirit … Remove traces of conspiracy
Cleansed of guilt … tilt waves built around fortresses
Filled with spilled milk
There’s no use crying over it now
Questions will always go unanswered
Like: Who~What~When~Why & How?
Water under the bridge rushes to the ridge of your reality
But you’re not really a damsel in distress
For you possess street~wise aptitude & keen vitality
While glancing over the edge of lyrics ledge ~ cautiously
Halt ill feelings ~ nauseously
Feel magnetic mists of rain bring healing feeling to your brain
Extracting pain ~ Attracting reasons to restrain
You must cease storing icons of insanity
No longer trusting vanity -- view reflections of calamity
As fading illusions caused by multiple contusions to your essence
Attempts to diminish your presence
Suspend in frozen frames of historic lessons
Meditate & contemplate to regain your composure
Prior battles in retrospect have caused flashback exposure
Peaceful …
… Tranquil …
… Thoughtful …
… Thankful …
That’s where you need to be
Keepin’ your mental in residential
While maintaining a realm of sanity

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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RE: I Wish U ... P*E*A*C*E ...
Mar 18th 2007
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RE: I Wish U ... P*E*A*C*E ...
Mar 18th 2007
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RE: I Wish U ... P*E*A*C*E ...
Mar 18th 2007
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oh a drop from our Queen...
Mar 18th 2007
4
      RE: oh a drop from our Queen...
Mar 18th 2007
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      Queen indeed, so
Mar 18th 2007
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      RE: oh a drop from our Queen...
Mar 19th 2007
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      oh i didnt see that...
Mar 19th 2007
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           RE: oh i didnt see that...
Mar 20th 2007
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This was peace.
Mar 18th 2007
7
peace on earth
Mar 19th 2007
8
I'm a fan
Mar 19th 2007
11
RE: I Wish U ... P*E*A*C*E ...
Mar 19th 2007
12
Thank U C.R.I.S.I.S..
Mar 20th 2007
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RE: I Wish U ... P*E*A*C*E ...
Mar 19th 2007
13
good to see people are still around
Mar 20th 2007
16
Ahhhhhh -- Prince Charming ....
Mar 21st 2007
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RE: I Wish U ... P*E*A*C*E ...
Mar 21st 2007
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RE: I Wish U ... P*E*A*C*E ...
Mar 22nd 2007
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*Smiles*
Mar 23rd 2007
22
and peace to you
Mar 22nd 2007
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RE: I Wish U ... P*E*A*C*E ...
Mar 22nd 2007
21
fave lines
Mar 23rd 2007
23
^
Mar 27th 2007
24

SONO DEF
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1. "RE: I Wish U ... P*E*A*C*E ..."
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Hey, what up Photo, you always showin me love, so here i am to say *ahem* this was beautiful...i dont think i've seen any of your posts before, good start for me

SONO MEANS I AM, ARE YOU?...

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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2. "RE: I Wish U ... P*E*A*C*E ..."
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Thank U sweetie! -- *much appreciated*

I don't write much anymore -- My steeze is mainly "read & respond" on the board -- But ^this^ flow is more~or~less for Ezzsential -- *That's mah gyrl* -- And I don't wannna see her hurting.

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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Ezzsential
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3. "RE: I Wish U ... P*E*A*C*E ..."
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loved this-needed this
even though it wasn't for me felt it was
and take it in

nuturing needed that

thanks sis




>>>>>>>>
shouldn't say it all or it will be taken
stolen by the Devil
God's my only vacation


...www.soundclick.com/ezzsentialsoul
www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoulmusiq
www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoul
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ASIEM
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Sun Mar-18-07 09:55 PM

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4. "oh a drop from our Queen..."
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Sun Mar-18-07 09:57 PM by ASIEM

  

          

this eliminates our feeling that any of us are alone ever, there is a spirit realm and this let's us know it.
that said Eszzential open your eyes...

"But ^this^ flow is more~or~less for Ezzsential -- *That's mah gyrl* -- And I don't wannna see her hurting."
"flow is more~or~less for Ezzsential"
thank you photo for the DEW dropped like mannah let us eat lmao i am totaally fuckin wit u
you know dat right
just pleez>>>

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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5. "RE: oh a drop from our Queen..."
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>thank you photo for the DEW dropped like mannah let us eat lmao i am totaally fuckin wit u
>you know dat right

Yes I know -- And I LOVE it when you fuck with me! -- *wink~wink* --



A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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SONO DEF
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6. "Queen indeed, so"
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dont quit now, i want more, i actually think i fell in love with this, the words inspire me, i'm gonna print em out to see every morning when i wake p, to wake me up to push ahead in the morning(we all know school tires us out, and we dont wanna get up)lol

SONO MEANS I AM, ARE YOU?...

  

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ASIEM
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10. "RE: oh a drop from our Queen..."
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ok so now my virtual fantasy is on again
desire is hired
while a goal is a task
the journey is better
the way to pleasure
is found on the road
often full of pain
that is where fullfilment
mingles at the foot
of the humble
just sniff the aroma
rub gently closing
the eyes listening
as palpatations rhyme
with words of simplicity
wait for me
i am coming too

wink back gggrrrrooowlll
u should see my face
aaahhrr lol

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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Ezzsential
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9. "oh i didnt see that..."
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thanks asiem

and THANK U PHOTO!!! MUCH NEEDED! ima cry now.. =/

(i been on here all day)



shouldn't say it all or it will be taken
stolen by the Devil
God's my only vacation


...www.soundclick.com/ezzsentialsoul
www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoulmusiq
www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoul
www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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14. "RE: oh i didnt see that..."
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Don't cry
Dry your eyes
::suck it up::
And *smile* --

Rainbows always come AFTER the storm -- And that's a good thing! -- *Yup~Yup*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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7. "This was peace."
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n/m

_________________________________________
"Too weird to live.... too rare to die..."

IG: KnowOne215 | PS+ ID: KnowOne215

  

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ms mimi diva
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8. "peace on earth"
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and goodwill poem hunting....thank you

http://worthwatering.blogspot.com
Can it be I stayed away too long?/
Did I leave your mind when I was gone?/
It's not my thing trying to get back/
But this time let me tell you where I'm at-- Jackson Five

  

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11. "I'm a fan"
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"Feel magnetic mists of rain bring healing feeling to your brain
Extracting pain ~ Attracting reasons to restrain"

this line^^^

the whole verse was ill.

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"Science" and Religion are the two most dangerous weapons of ideology. See holocaust.

Why do "scientists" constantly produce statistics based on "race", a social construct?

  

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12. "RE: I Wish U ... P*E*A*C*E ..."
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This was like the dopest peace i read from someone on hear in a while, I liked you insight and the vivid imagery, it was brilliant.

Racism is a C.R.I.S.I.S
Causing Rifts In Socially Ignorant Societies


T.H.I.N.K
True Habitual Intelligence Needs Knowledge
Knowledge is key, Think

  

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15. "Thank U C.R.I.S.I.S.."
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*Much Appreciated* --

>This was like the dopest peace i read from someone on hear in a while

But you "need" to read more on this board -- *Seriously* --

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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ladysnoblood
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13. "RE: I Wish U ... P*E*A*C*E ..."
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dam you go girl what you got a dictionary by you side when you write
that was headstrung and it rung
stand up for what you believe and who you are and when the tuff times come keep standing for it shell only last a minute
but to us it feels like a life time
when we continue to think about in our mines
unable to let it setting of the sun

great work

  

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16. "good to see people are still around"
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i have a lil peace now

but my muse has either died or is in a coma...

i cant let it rest in peace

so it haunts my notepads...

hmmm....maybe i'll continue this in a new post

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

  

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17. "Ahhhhhh -- Prince Charming ...."
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*Photo kisses Prince Out Of Coma*


Wake the fuck ^UP^! -- *hehehe*


*Photo kisses Prince's Pen Too*


Now git to writin' scribe ...


(((Welcome Back)))






A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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savagehenry
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18. "RE: I Wish U ... P*E*A*C*E ..."
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Excellent, this is very nicely done.

  

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19. "RE: I Wish U ... P*E*A*C*E ..."
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i thought i had already replied to this....

water, clear in the ocean when you can see the fish swimming below. moving like the ocean does, subtle with small white caps on tiny waves. thats what this is.

  

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22. "*Smiles*"
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Your "reply" is like a poem within itself --


Thank you ma'am! -- *Much Appreciated*


I kinda miss YOUR words -- Hope 2 C summmthin' from you soon --





A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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Universal Truth Allah
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20. "and peace to you"
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Thu Mar-22-07 11:32 AM by Universal Truth Alla

          

warm currents photo!

the poem is wild. i like it, it has an edge to it that is missing from a lot of so called poems.

i like the
tranquil... thoughtful... thankful...

that was just smooth...

Peace!

  

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21. "RE: I Wish U ... P*E*A*C*E ..."
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photo i liked this it had a certain feel to it i would love to hear it being read , ver nice

peace

  

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are here:

As fading illusions caused by multiple contusions to your essence
Attempts to diminish your presence
Suspend in frozen frames of historic lessons
Meditate & contemplate to regain your composure
Prior battles in retrospect have caused flashback exposure

*nods* Peace~

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http://www.clutchmagazine.com|writing for more than food.

the bitter cannot live with the sweet.

  

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>Peaceful …
>… Tranquil …
> … Thoughtful …
> … Thankful …
>Examine fluid feelings as oceans of emotions
>Wash lyrically lubricant lotions all over you
>~~Gently~~
>Bathing your shattered spirit … Remove traces of conspiracy
>Cleansed of guilt … tilt waves built around fortresses
>Filled with spilled milk
>There’s no use crying over it now
>Questions will always go unanswered
>Like: Who~What~When~Why & How?
>Water under the bridge rushes to the ridge of your reality
>But you’re not really a damsel in distress

_____________________________________

The cry I bring down from the hills
__________belongs to a girl still burning
__________inside my head. At daybreak

____________________she burns like a piece of paper. - YK

  

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