confused, not amused feel system abused pen and pad as I use this muse to fight fear based on negativity bad news and others cynical views I build strength to choose nothing no thoughts means no mind to lose
1. "RE: losin' confusion" In response to Reply # 0
the pain aches with pain
a muscle gone insane
names run the game
as words try to explain the unexplained
aim to make life tame
unfulfilling 'cause
deep down we're all the same
need happiness
but want our name to change the game
Could it be this pain in my vein
is just that,
in vain?
2. "RE: losin' confusion" In response to Reply # 1 Mon Mar-12-07 11:19 AM by poestryman
I take notes to keep my mind focused as thoughts take notice I speak this cause what I write is meant to give your thoughts bliss like when you start to reminisce and wish you lose touch of presence forget what the present is and instead of giving thanks to God like Santa gives presents to kids you give greed to fear and chase those dead presidents caught up in other peoples motives thinking about what the future brings know that the future never happens the past never was and the now is all there ever is
3. "RE: losin' confusion" In response to Reply # 2
So I was living for the now, right? Classical plight, same results as many past lives. The last time someone tried to change, they were deaded. Freedom is over seas, too busy getting be-headed. Think there's a message? No, there's no moral to this conflict. So many slaves to conscience, I think it's new wave bondage. When record sales become the topic of the day, when heads decide to jack the music anyway. Who pays? We do. A whole culture replaced. We think we're higher than the past's mistakes.
"Once was the nigga in the back of the class who never said nothin/Hip-Hop became my amplifier, I live for inspiration/For without that I will die!"- Andre 3000
4. "RE: losin' confusion" In response to Reply # 3
neo slaves thoughts caught in a daze amazed when planes glaze buildings but still no one's willing to change spend our days in a commercial haze true inner self like a mouse trapped in a maze one minute confused about why so many troops are used next minute those thoughts of cause we lose we have no time to wake from the snooze not with so much good shit on the tube
5. "RE: losin' confusion" In response to Reply # 4
that tube controlled by you? oh, it's a guilty pleasure that lasso loop's dragging us in before we had a chance to sever I've never seen so much hate in my life so many N-bombs tossed with anonymity disguised That 15 minutes is up for grabs now You gotta love it We're manufacturing "legends" now From Clarkson to Hudson In a world where everyone's entitled to shine What's the use in learning how to rhyme?
"Once was the nigga in the back of the class who never said nothin/Hip-Hop became my amplifier, I live for inspiration/For without that I will die!"- Andre 3000
6. "RE: losin' confusion" In response to Reply # 5
why not rhyme? forget about time become one with a process divine you can create fine wine in time understand your self better with each line we adventure in the mental only able to write truths only know our own views truthful views based on our youths who knew our perspectives skewed based on topics they would choose and deliver through the news that's why we get creative keep our motives shifted we move from negative to positive begin to understand the worlds greatest gift what the beauty of love is
7. "RE: losin' confusion" In response to Reply # 0
you got skillz look forward to more welcome
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
8. "RE: losin' confusion" In response to Reply # 7
thanks ASIEM...
truth enters the mental only once we stop sending it signals K-OS says it's simple and that's why it's difficult like spilt milk no-knowledge breeds guilt but don't cry over knowledge spilt we need an empty mind before we refill it But how does one do it... replenish that infinite fluid? when we meditate on a mindstate we tend to elevate just you truth and silence like a three way blind date so blind sometimes we choose hate learn about murti, as in Krishna study Tolle's words, like Math does Algebra self knowledge they'll teach ya read Zulu's lessons Afrika Bambataa tell's ya man's from Africa evolved mitochondria but then forget every word memorys absurd Past not close to what the Now’s worth
9. "RE: losin' confusion" In response to Reply # 8
i'll tell you how to refill but check j dilla return table turns spine spinning awaken that energy locked at surface pelvic menace reaching upward toward belly i have arrived in a cloud of darkness wipe'n a pin hole in atlantis destruction girls be front'n when you think a rick the rule is watching hop scotch'n down young brick roads i'm to old holding the power of heaven in hell seeping out third eye illuminating crown until body in flame electric eel hail merry stuff in yo mouth no lecture but lector hannibal i leave that pussy cat lion in shambles pink tye bow reproved pro reproing your studds digging deep in the mudd tai chi hungar stance ready
finding who you are is an amazing thing
"trick"
setup a password but i don't even know you that well
10. "RE: losin' confusion" In response to Reply # 9
On top of this someone's lost stream of "consciousness" is cloggin up my arteries and bogglin my noggin kid knowlegde is power man you shouldn't misuse so many thoughts, don't you see it's only you who's not confused? you should check the subject 'fore you start you verbal dumpin I know you got it in you to relate to us with somethin the purpose is, not to get lost in your words it's to find some common ground with the rest of us nerds don't get me wrong, I love Aes but there's a time and place and it's better if you wait to put it on some drum and bass
"Once was the nigga in the back of the class who never said nothin/Hip-Hop became my amplifier, I live for inspiration/For without that I will die!"- Andre 3000
11. "RE: losin' confusion" In response to Reply # 10
confusion is getting a's but you did the math in a school daze timberlands stomping road blocks and but tocks humping last sec on star clock hockey is or is not a white league sport smoking up court rooms weed from amsterdam it's legal people so don't snitch like this bitch that keeps pubic hairs itching like i had crabs confuse because i told the nurse and she laughed while giving me head dam god am i dead is my dick red laying undressed in a hospital bed confuse it must been all that booze i use to drink i steel see pink elephants in poka dot sandles wit a rosary stapled to her ankle mango mushed and i just nut one handed ejaculation pops caught me master-bating young lady 2 the dance flow well that's enough gotta go
but before i leave i realise i can't grasp for love million years ago (MYA) and over look whats been there for me the hole time
dam i love you guys but no beats i have a fleet of my own
12. "RE: losin' confusion" In response to Reply # 11
stay ill with the fleet but you know, it's only me to toss out a life saver in case the shit sink it's more than you think it's bigger than you imagined my words expose folks who's float is only average i've had this, I knew my words were magic i've lasted it's obvious in those lines that you don't really grasp it maybe you're a novice whose lacking in knowledge to understand the craft or even know just what to call it appalling fellowship and talent's all i ask your shallow static rhymes is insecurity masked
"Once was the nigga in the back of the class who never said nothin/Hip-Hop became my amplifier, I live for inspiration/For without that I will die!"- Andre 3000
13. "RE: losin' confusion" In response to Reply # 12
as i hit the crack pipe and blast this wensday night paul rever seen the light and the lone star flag was still there these dudes must not know about me wheres b b beyonce ask her kid don't play i be dam if i be on yo team go a head and scream like a playboy bunny the only thing funny is that michigan pussy acting like a lion you ain't from zion you dying and don't even know it yo spit is garbage talking about knowledge you been to college and still yo wisdom is abolish by intent to invent unity queen lati key keep dreaming windows crash doors slam i'm leaving you freezing on a polaroid picture evidence of hatred gone wild sticky finger prints and smile
14. "RE: losin' confusion" In response to Reply # 13 Wed Mar-14-07 08:28 PM by Chairman Ryan D
pardon par' you can't expect me not to laugh at that attack, you lacked any actual math to plan this rhyme, cuz when you did it you dropped erroneous facts like a mental midget listen. it's child's play evidence in your handle when i was young I punked kids dump trucks dismantled this is too difficult for you son but we could teach you better to learn from experienced kids who could eat you when you were young, for fun did your daddy ever beat you? you gotta be slightly retarded to think we're equal or maybe that you're greater than i told you it'd be safer man, take a riff from my Baby Grand B don't have a baby MAN!!! though I'm glad you're thuggin in Texas it has nothing to do with your skill you don't impress us thinking you could end the thread you didn't start fucked up callin that shit you write art lucked up passing high school, you wasn't smart but what? braggin you fool?!? got no heart
"Once was the nigga in the back of the class who never said nothin/Hip-Hop became my amplifier, I live for inspiration/For without that I will die!"- Andre 3000
16. "RE: losin' confusion" In response to Reply # 14 Thu Mar-15-07 12:31 PM by poestryman
self concious responses a few word choices proof we like to hear our own voices please remember the original topic boice free our minds become aware of ignorance show kids what the importance of mental fitness is 'cause they learn from the lives we lived truth means we're one there's no "mine is this" and "this is his" share give let them witness a new conciousness battle of the fittest? be sure to find the right exercises to weaken the ego we must strengthen the mind to bad most get caught in the daily grind purpose in my signature inner peace through rhyme creativity finds an empty mind thankful every time I write it finds mine
17. "RE: losin' confusion" In response to Reply # 16
the wisdom of word choice speaks volumes experience wins, and so I'm bound to speak from that place and when I clown fools I replace their tastes with a sound view I relate my case and uplift writers I displace their hate to make their souls lighter Could you question my tactics? do you see it as backwards? to discern the real lyricists from actors? I thought about it after, and knew it would be foolish to not challenge the kid and see how well the tool spits who quits? not an emcee, we fellowship criticism brought his anger out the fellow tripped and wrote crude verses and tried to pass it off as a gangster rapper it sounded hella soft I'd rather out do him with the skill than tell him off wanna see how well the boy spits? I give it to you raw
I drop rhymes for a greater cause, I laugh to see a hater fall.
"Once was the nigga in the back of the class who never said nothin/Hip-Hop became my amplifier, I live for inspiration/For without that I will die!"- Andre 3000
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