thie ending has me wondering with so much content it seemed to end abruptly and kinna the easy way out whaat?
"i don't want your love" ??? is that really true?
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
7. "RE: i thought the following lines" In response to Reply # 4
totally understand. a lot of my pieces are kinda like works in progress. i put down the first thing that comes to mind when i want to convey something and usually leave it as is. this was what free flowing. the section you took to took me more time the rest because i knew what i wanted to play around with and then had to figure out a 'pretty' way of doing so
thanks for the feedback... working on finishing this up... will post up when done